Lt. Col. Thok Posted August 28, 2008 That would defeat the purpose of us going down there in the first place. Remember- there is no time to alert the army, wouwie's troops are about to die, and the machine could be complete at any time soon. Besides, there probably wouldn't be a RSD way out there. True, true. I guess we're going to have to be like Iron man - carrying our armour around in a briefcase.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted August 29, 2008 Nobody else wants to join? Anybody? Alright then, I'll start working on the pic, with everyone geared up for Hoth. MacK, you don't have to change your outfit if you don't want to, the clone armor is fine. Oh yeah, and I contacted Skipper 24, and he wants to be temporarily removed, so he'll just stay with the ship. Also, simonjedi, I need an alternate outfit for you in this chapter, otherwise I will assign you one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
simonjedi Posted August 29, 2008 Ideally: Before we land - my character has the apprentice's battle damaged torso and legs, to show he's wounded. Hoth Han/ Rebel or imperial Hoth trooper torso for the others. But i'll live with a random clone torso Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted August 29, 2008 (edited) So, we agree that we are going to land on the planet without getting any help first? Well, seeing as the CIS will do anything to stop us, this will be a hard landing! About Skipper24: Too bad! I was looking forward to having him in the game. But seeing as he never really got into the game, it wont be too hard to remove him. I hope he'll get (back) in soon. About DS: I really don't think that he is visiting this site any longer, so I say we should at least remove him temporarily. About simonjedi's outfit: I think we can use any burned/damaged looking torso on him for now (or maybe his old torso), with one arm exchanged for a fleshy or blood-red one. Afterwards, we can use any Hoth-type torso for him, I think. Let's hope someone will still join today! Edited August 29, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted August 29, 2008 So, we agree that we are going to land on the planet without getting any help first? Well, seeing as the CIS will do anything to stop us, this will be a hard landing! About Skipper24: Too bad! I was looking forward to having him in the game. But seeing as he never really got into the game, it wont be too hard to remove him. I hope he'll get (back) in soon. About DS: I really don't think that he is visiting this site any longer, so I say we should at least remove him temporarily. About simonjedi's outfit: I think we can use any burned/damaged looking torso on him for now (or maybe his old torso), with one arm exchanged for a fleshy or blood-red one. Afterwards, we can use any Hoth-type torso for him, I think. Let's hope someone will still join today! For DS, I'll keep him with Skipper and the ship. If he doesn't post for a while, we can kill him off. I don't have any Hoth torsos, but I'll use a new clone trooper torso instead. Maybe I could give you dark blue arms or something to make your character unique? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
simonjedi Posted August 29, 2008 If Skipper24 is the guy with the mission to kill Obi wan then he can just be written out. He technically hasn't met us yet. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 29, 2008 So, Annix and I are with the CIS as prisoners, and by the time we "leave" I'll have a new outfit. You see, in the story, my current outfit doesn't accomodate with the weather, so by the time I'm in the icey colds of Hoth, I'll have something more... warm. Since I don't think I'll be in the first post (You're breaking us out THAT soon?), you don't have to worry. Also, can someone show a picture of Annix? Which is he on the sig? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) So, Annix and I are with the CIS as prisoners, and by the time we "leave" I'll have a new outfit. You see, in the story, my current outfit doesn't accommodate with the weather, so by the time I'm in the icy colds of Hoth, I'll have something more... warm. Since I don't think I'll be in the first post (You're breaking us out THAT soon?), you don't have to worry. Also, can someone show a picture of Annix? Which is he on the sig? Actually, Annix was captured to be kept captive. It's something we organized because our member Vaders_son, who plays him, wanted to be temporarily removed. So it would be better if you would have a different story or would at least be in a different prison. Besides, it could take a while until we get to you, and I'm tired of rescuing people from prisons. Edited August 30, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Actually, Annix was captured to be kept captive. It's something we organized because our member Vaders_son, who plays him, wanted to be temporarily removed. So it would be better if you would have a different story or would at least be in a different prison. Besides, it could take a while until we get to you, and I'm tired of rescuing people from prisons. Ok. From now on, I am in a different prison than Annix. Also, I don't need to be rescued. I can escape myself! I'm an expert in commando operations, remember? I don't need a full squadron on my back ! I plan to jump in and attempt to aid Easy 101, where I meet you guys. For about 3 posts, I have my own story, and then I "team up" with you fellas. Edited August 30, 2008 by Adam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted August 30, 2008 Alright, here we go! Remember to use a different color font when not talking in the story!! Chapter 3 In the ship, the team was discussing how they would get onto the planet. Surely, the planet would be heavily guarded by CIS Ships. "Do you have a cloaking device on this ship?" Butcher asked MacK. "Yes, but they will still see us on radar" said MacK doubtfully. "Luckily, I have a plan," said Butcher as he pulled out some tiny discs, about 2 centimeters in diameter, out of his backpack and started placing them all around the interior of the ship. "Radar blockers" he explained. "They scramble the code on any radar close enough. Unfortunately, they can still see a faint trace of our ship, but since Hoth gets a lot of meteors, they'll just suspect we're one". "Good thinking," said Thok. "Alright", said Jim. "Lets go! Everyone suit up for the cold weather!" *** The landing had gone perfectly. The force must have been on their side today. "I think someone should stay with the ship, just in case," said Oky Wan. "I'll volunteer", said Jones. "I will too," said Skipper. "Okay, good. Now we have to find where that call of help came from, and then we can follow the trail from there. And try not to attract any attention", said Butcher. "C'mon". The banner with all of the characters will be done soon, member ~VBBN~ was very generous in making one! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) "Woah, woah! Wait a minute!" said Oky Wan confused. "Who the heck are these guys? I didn't even notice them on board the ship!" "MacK and Thok picked them up on Utapau while we were checking on Garviel" explained Jim. "Skipper is an agent of the Republic on a classified mission, and William Jones here is a citizen of Utapau who volunteered to assist us." Oky Wan mumbled: "Man, nobody ever tells me anything." "Any other questions?" asked Jim. "Actually, I have one" said MacK. "How are gonna find our friends in need?" "I traced the message back to a location slightly north from here. So, if we walk north for a while, we should find them." explained Jim. "Excellent!" said Thok, who was carrying Garviel on a hover-bed. "Let's go then!" And so, the five of them moved out... Edited August 30, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted August 30, 2008 "Woah, woah! Wait a minute!" said Oky Wan confused. "Who the heck are these guys? I didn't even notice them on board the ship!" "MacK and Thok picked them up on Utapau while we were checking on Garviel" explained Jim. "Skipper is an agent of the Republic on a classified mission, and William Jones here is a citizen of Utapau who volunteered to assist us." Oky Wan mumbled: "Man, nobody ever tells me anything." "Any other questions?" asked Jim. "Actually, I have one" said MacK. "How are gonna find our friends in need?" "I traced the message back to a location slightly north from here. So, if we walk north for a while, we should find them." explained Jim. "Excellent!" said Thok. "Let's go then!" And so, the four of them moved out... Whoops, my bad! I forgot that Skipper wasn't with us yet... thanks for covering that up, Oky Wan. By the way, there are five of us traveling together: Me, you, MacK, Thok, and Simonjedi. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 As soon as my camera battery recharges, I'll introduce my character and escape from the CIS. Oky Wan, great idea on how to keep those two out of the story! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Whoops, my bad! I forgot that Skipper wasn't with us yet... thanks for covering that up, Oky Wan. By the way, there are five of us traveling together: Me, you, MacK, Thok, and Simonjedi. Well, considering Simonjedi is half dead, I didn't really count him. But as you wish - Post edited. Oky Wan, great idea on how to keep those two out of the story! That credit goes to Jim. I just covered up the fact that those two were with us all of a sudden. Looking forward to your pic-filled post! EDIT: LOL. That's a colorful post! Edited August 30, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 Well, considering Simonjedi is half dead, I didn't really count him. But as you wish - Post edited.That credit goes to Jim. I just covered up the fact that those two were with us all of a sudden. Looking forward to your pic-filled post! Maybe he could be moved out on a stretcher? It'll be about an hour (or hour and a half) untill my battery is charged . Dumb Panasonic. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Maybe he could be moved out on a stretcher? Well, I thought something like a hover-bed would be more StarWars-ish, so maybe it could be a hover-stretcher? Edited August 30, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 Yes, a hover-stretcher would be nice....... and, while we're at it, how about the official ambulence star crafts and the intergalactic hospital? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted August 30, 2008 Okay, okay, enough, we would'nt want you guys chambered, now would we? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Adam waited on the holding chair, searching for an opportunity. He had been in this CIS holding camp on Hoth for nearly three weeks, and it was now that they lugged him out of his cell to perform testing on him. This was the moment he had been waitng for- if only the two men conversing would reveal more of the secret operations that were about to take place. "And the serum will work this time?" asked a caped figure threateningly. "Ov courze," said the strangely accented doctor, "I hav removed the vlaws in my hypothesis, and ze var-he-ables have been-" "Whatever!" the caped man said sharply. "But if you're wrong, Dr. Whilyem-" "I em peerfeectly avare of ze conzequences!" Dr. Whilyem snapped. "The Shroomiek Vormula zhood vork now." On that note, the black-cloaked man turned and exited the room, leaving Adam and Whilyem alone together. The Doctor turned to Adam and held up a vile of redish-tan liquid malevolently. "Zo yuu are ze neeixt suubjeect? Av vell, hold-" Adam kicked the leg restraint he had been loosening with his foot, causing Dr. Whilyem to stab himself with the serum. The result had killed him, but no blood got into the fluid, so Adam pulled it out and stuck it in a metal vile. He then picked up his gun, which they had placed on a counter next to a Gungan brain and some green blob, dashed out into the hallway. The CIS complex was a simple place; there were few doors on the rough white walls as he ran through each narrow passage, trying to remember the way the droid squadron that captured him had come in. Suddenly, it was chasing him. Adam had only seen it in blurry pictures, but this was definately it. The last serum had improved the monster; it now boasted a long horn and stronger legs than the ones Adam had squinted at on numerous photobytes. However much speed Adam's adrenaline rush had granted him, the mutant moved more quickly. He couldn't outrun it. Then he saw it. His only ticket out. Down through a heating vent. So, how did you like my first post? I plan on hooking up with you guys in two posts. Edited August 30, 2008 by Adam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oky Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) So, how did you like my first post? I plan on hooking up with you guys in two posts. Pretty good! Keep it up! Nice holding chair! And interesting monster... but I don't get something: Was the serum that they wanted to test on you meant to improve this monster? Is that what this is all about, or is that a different story? And does any of this have anything to do with the time machine? LOL. A Gungan brain? Well that couldn't have been very large! Oh, and congrats on your new title, Jim! Edited August 30, 2008 by Oky Wan Kenobi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
simonjedi Posted August 30, 2008 Great first post even with the stereotypical comedic german accent. I'll be interested to see how the serum story arc continues. Garviel Loken was dragging behind the rest of the group. The group had decided he was fit enough to walk. "Garviel hurry up, you're lagging behind" sparked a voice in his ear, it was MacK, sounding impatient. "I can't help it, can I" Loken moaned back, "being thrown from a coreship, while its exploding is pretty painful". Another voice appeared in his head, this time of Oky, who was less helpful "If you don't stop moaning i'll feed you to the wampas myself, we have a job to do." Garviel swore under his breath hoping the voxcasters in his helmet hadn't picked it up. The whole group were wearing Clone Armour to keep them alive in the cold wastelands of hoth. He had no idea what we were expecting to find down here, having been in surgery during the journey to hoth. Thok who was a head of us tripped over something, and the rest of the group ran over to him, Oky picked up a burned piece of metal, the symbol of the republic just about visible. "Must have been their drop ship" Jim muttered grimly Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 30, 2008 (edited) Pretty good! Keep it up! Nice holding chair! And interesting monster... but I don't get something: Was the serum that they wanted to test on you meant to improve this monster? Is that what this is all about, or is that a different story? And does any of this have anything to do with the time machine?LOL. A Gungan brain? Well that couldn't have been very large! Oh, and congrats on your new title, Jim! Thanks! The serum was ment to improve the current monster that you saw-- that one only lasts a short while before it dies. This has a lot to do with the time machine, as you'll see in the future (a.k.a. when explain my backround to the characters in the story). BTW, Jim's new title is explained by me in the "How did you get your title?" thread. Sorry, for some reason the color didn't work! Edited August 31, 2008 by Adam Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lt. Col. Thok Posted August 31, 2008 (edited) Thok:Crikey bikey! *shakes head* I gotta be more careful of where I'm going! Hey... Thok found a footprint in the snow leading away from the group. He looked up. Thok: Well, they obviously went off in this direction... He brought a small disc from his bag, placed it on the print. It glowed briefly, and illuminated the trail of footprints. Thok: Now, this only lasts for 50 feet of footprints. I have fifteen other markers; an alternative would be for one of us to run back and grab it each time we reach the end of the line, seeing as they are reusable. As well, the prints will be lit up until one of us says off.... The prints disappeared.. Thok:...and will reappear when someone says on. The prints reappeared. Group:Wow, wow, impressive... They started following the prints, with Thok leading the way in case the prints ran out. Butcher ran up to Thok. Butcher: Great work back there, Thok. Thok: Thanks. Actually, Butcher, there's something I want to talk to you about.... I love cliffhangers, don't you? Edited August 31, 2008 by Lt. Col. Thok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Adam Posted August 31, 2008 Adam tumbled down the shaft, growing warmer and warmer as he fell. He wasn't sure how much more heat he could take, until finally.... He saw the ground approaching, fast, so Adam shoved his elbows into the walls of the long shaft and slowed his landing. He landed right next to the heating unit, and, after scoping the area and taking several steps back, fired two shots and the machinery. The explosion blew a hole in the wall, which, as Adam had suspected, lead outside. He clambered out of this hole, trying not to cut himself on the jagged metal. Once on the ice, Adam ran, programing the starfighter he had arrived with to pick him up. There was a group of Easy 101 troops that could use his help. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wouwie Posted August 31, 2008 'Sir, the area where the droids are is being fired with heavy weapons!' Said a soldier. 'I think that's Com. Rex! Can you see any ships in the space around Hoth?' 'Yes sir! 1 Heavy class assault ship, republic,, multiple RGS heading towards the base and some unidentifed ship heading elsewhere on Hoth!' 'I think we are finally getting back-up!' 'Danmit! Sir, the got AntiAir missles! Already 2 gunships down!' 'Do we have anything to kill the droids?!' 'No sir! Sadly not...' 'Well, then say goodbye to the back-up..' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
