Purr Posted October 11, 2013 Posted October 11, 2013 Two young Mitgardians practicing there archery skills in there spare time in the south of Mitgardia. Quote
kabel Posted October 11, 2013 Posted October 11, 2013 looking rather nice already. I'd add some more variation on the ground though, smaller plates, more vegetation maybe the one or dark tan plate or so ... Quote
soccerkid6 Posted October 11, 2013 Posted October 11, 2013 I like the target hung from the tree Nice pose on the guy sitting on the ground. As kabel said a little more variation on the ground with plates and plants would look good. Also you could add a red 1x2 plate to the back of the target so the center hole in the target is red Quote
Bkrosell Posted October 11, 2013 Posted October 11, 2013 Great start, try adding some snow to the ground.I like the hanging target as well, Quote
Alfadas Posted October 11, 2013 Posted October 11, 2013 Looks great! Like the figs and three, but indeed there could be more plants or some snow. But, great work! Quote
Purr Posted October 18, 2013 Author Posted October 18, 2013 I have updated my build. It is still not perfect, but it is in the right direction? Quote
soccerkid6 Posted October 18, 2013 Posted October 18, 2013 That does look better, Purr The path to the target looks better and I like that you filled in the center of it. Keep paying attention to suggestions and you'll be a great MOCer in no time Quote
mpoh98 Posted October 18, 2013 Posted October 18, 2013 Ooh, much better!I agree with soccerkid6, just follow the suggestions, and you should do great! One minor nitpick is pictures, they are a little blurry. Quote
Gideon Posted October 18, 2013 Posted October 18, 2013 Nice vignette (the last picture), I like the target and the tree! As mpoh98 pointed out, the photography needs some more attention in the future to take your MOC presenting to the next level. Quote
Purr Posted October 21, 2013 Author Posted October 21, 2013 Thanks for the comments and in a short time I learned already so much about mocing. The Photograhpy is a point that I definitely want to improve next time Quote
de Gothia Posted October 22, 2013 Posted October 22, 2013 A nice little moc for sure! Great to see that you pay attention to the tips given to you! Quote
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