marvelBoy123
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[K2 - Mortis - FF) Life Watching Mortis
marvelBoy123 replied to RocketBoy's topic in Factions Archive
Massive improvement on the landscape - the smaller pieces make it feel far more natural and the little patches of rock work well too! The tree, vegetation and campfire are great too - this really captures the feel of being out in the wilderness. I think the story is great too and a nice length - you've maintained a lot of detail about the characters but it is a slightly shorter read. One thing to possibly think about is the use of the 1wide brown tiles: I'd always associate them with wooden floors so maybe two wide tiles or breaking it up a little with quarter round tiles would make it even better! -
[K4 - Entralla - FF] Life: Parade of Ghosts
marvelBoy123 replied to RocketBoy's topic in Factions Archive
Really nice build! The layered terrain looks great, the vines growing up the building are cool and both buildings feel very realistic but the circular doorways still help to keep it within the star wars aesthetic. The only nitpick that I have is that the Faction isn't really obvious from the build itself - a Pentastar flag flying from one of the buildings or some characters with an obvious pentastar allegiance (e.g. off duty stormtroopers) would really have perfected the scene from my perspective. -
[H16 - Endor - TT] Wreckage on the forest moon of Endor
marvelBoy123 replied to MinerEvlGuy's topic in Factions Archive
Nice build - some good colour choices and realistic vegetation. -
[L4 - Dantooine - PA] Old Friends, Once Foes
marvelBoy123 replied to RocketBoy's topic in Factions Archive
Love the homestead and the story. Th character designs are great and the narrative really helps to expand on that. The landscape could use some work but it in an improvement from some of your past ones. -
[O7 - Krownest - CE] Message from the wreckage
marvelBoy123 replied to Ross Fisher's topic in Factions Archive
A nice build and cool representation of the concept art. I would have loved to see a hole in the ships side though - that would have given a lot of potential for different textures etc. -
Love how you have worked with forced perspective - a very cinematic appearance to the lone figure in the cave!
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[H6 - Parnassos - FF] Altruistic Wreckage
marvelBoy123 replied to goatman461's topic in Factions Archive
Love that landscape and the ship looks really star wars-y -
[O9 - Onderon and Dxun - CE] Taco Wreckage
marvelBoy123 replied to pombe's topic in Factions Archive
The roof and tread bike are both really good! -
A nice little micro landscape!
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[K21-Delrakkin-TT] Wreckage and a corpse
marvelBoy123 replied to Brickwolf's topic in Factions Archive
A nice TIE fighter - really like how you have given it that weathered effect! -
[M10 - Kuat - TT] A wreckage for the future
marvelBoy123 replied to Macropus's topic in Factions Archive
Really nice build - love how much detail you managed to get in such a small space! -
[L4 - Dantooine - PA] Wreckage of the Red Moon
marvelBoy123 replied to goatman461's topic in Factions Archive
Love how you well you have captured the action in this build - a lot of builds at this scale lose the feel of a classic star wars dogfight but you have captured that so well! -
A nice little build and a cool speeder!
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[M13-devaron-TT] An old wreckage
marvelBoy123 replied to Commander Aufik's topic in Factions Archive
Love all the different plants that you have incorporated. -
[H6 - Parnassos - FF] Wreckage on the Violent Violet Wastelands
marvelBoy123 replied to RocketBoy's topic in Factions Archive
Some really nice figures and I love how you have spread stuff out. The little patches of landscape have really enabled you to make the most of the space without having to find lots of pink bricks for landscaping. The animal is great too - making creatures that look organic is really difficult but something you always do really well! -
[M13 - Devaron - CS] Wretched Space Port
marvelBoy123 replied to MKJoshA's topic in Factions Archive
A really nice build with a lot of cool aliens! -
As others have said, the crash feels very convincing - the smoke, angle and bits of the ships frame really give the crash a lot of atmosphere.
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[M13 - Devaron - CS] Don't Upset the Locals
marvelBoy123 replied to MKJoshA's topic in Factions Archive
A nice little scene and the devaronians are nice but I do wish lego would make some better expressions for them... -
[M13 - Devaron - CS] Battle Among the Wreckage
marvelBoy123 replied to MKJoshA's topic in Factions Archive
The trees are really cool and the TIE wing is great. You have managed to capture a lot of action within the build! -
[M13 - Devaron - CS] Wreckage at the Front Door
marvelBoy123 replied to MKJoshA's topic in Factions Archive
The trees look great and the facility design is nice. I would have loved to see the Y-wing engine better integrated into the landscape though - doesn't seem to be much in the way of a crater despite the fact that it has failed from the sky. -
Love the AT-ST wreck - you have made some really great builds for this LTC
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Really cool technique for the ground around the crash - definitely one of the builds for this LTC that integrates the crashed vehicle best. I think it could have looked cool with some smoke perhaps but an amazing build nonetheless.
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[J21 - Kinooine - CFS] A Wrecked Tombstone
marvelBoy123 replied to Fenghuang0296's topic in Factions Archive
A nice little build and your characters narrative is really interesting - nice to see a CFS character who isn't a peaceful farmer type... -
[O7 - Ordo - CE] Wreckage beneath the waves
marvelBoy123 replied to n1majneb's topic in Factions Archive
Really like the Karkarodon. The TIE wreckage is good when you know what it is but perhaps not immediately obvious! -
[O7 - Ordo - CE] And let that be a lesson to them...
marvelBoy123 replied to n1majneb's topic in Factions Archive
A nice little build - I really do like that aquatic mando!