Donnie Bricko Posted September 20, 2013 Somewhere in the outter rim aboard the assault freighter Dearn...Alliance Captain Partan called Five Squad and Red Squad Six to deck 3 Mission Command to discuss details of a new operation. "The Alliance has learned that the Empire arrived at Bespin and entered Cloud City. The main fleet will be dispatching troops to the lower levels. Commander Piranha has tasked us with evacuation of the administrative levels. Each squad will land a small freighter... Please judge this free build. Thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nom Carver Posted September 20, 2013 Nice one, it does feel like something is about to happen but the black screen looks a little plain. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MstrOfPppts Posted September 20, 2013 Yeah something that I've missed in all the Star Wars, good old mission planing. In every SW or CW there's just a few generals with a Jedi making plans and somehow all the clones on the battlefield just know what to do ... So this is a very welcome idea for a MOC. The screen does look a bit too much like blackboard which I guess is far too oldfashioned for Star Wars. The build is nice and smooth though as always I miss some wall detailing since no ship has many plain walls without any pipes or something sticking out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LegoFjotten Posted September 20, 2013 Nice smooth build, similar in concept to a freebuild I'm working on! A little bit more details would probably make it come even more alive though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bkrosell Posted September 20, 2013 I agree with legoFjotten, try adding some color to the floor and maybe some decorations on the wall.I like the walls though, do they open? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Brickdoctor Posted September 23, 2013 I disagree with adding more color; I think you've got a decent variety of color already through the minifigs, not bright colors, but a variety of colors. Maybe some orange-suited pilots would make the MOC 'pop' and draw the eye more, but it seems okay to me. Reminds me of the atmosphere of the Yavin IV briefing room in Star Wars. I like the smoothness, too. I think what you could add would be more greebling: some vents, some consoles, some random small containers, maybe some wires leading to the big screen... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Donnie Bricko Posted September 23, 2013 Thanks for the feedback all. I agree with legoFjotten, try adding some color to the floor and maybe some decorations on the wall.I like the walls though, do they open? No the door doesn't open. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shadows of Nar Eurbrikka Posted October 8, 2013 Judges have awarded you 3 XP! Your character's stats will be updated shortly. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kermit Posted October 8, 2013 Nice moc. I keep thinking that screen is a blast door that is about to open to reveal an army of storm troopers. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TCStall Posted October 19, 2013 This is really cool, is the room the briefing room in the picture based on the one in the movies from before the Death Star assault? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
