RaincloudDustbin Posted July 17, 2013 Hey everyone, I'm writing a Batman series called 'The Survival Game' where basically, Ivy has turned Gotham into a desert island. I thought it was a really interesting concept so please check it out. Issue one has been uploaded so I'll link that. I'll upload the photos here but not the stories- I'll just link them. I'd love some feedback on what you thought and I'd prefer some actual improvements over '' It was good.'' or ''I didn't really like it''. One thing I tried to do was interpret characters differently. As you can see with the Joker's alternate outfit and hair. I also really like the effect on the photo but I'm not sure what to think about the story. Thanks, TT. http://www.flickr.com/photos/91926269@N06/9308990684/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
megabot22 Posted July 17, 2013 the story is good and i like the way you changed joker Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RaincloudDustbin Posted July 17, 2013 Thanks, Do you like the premise of the island? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
megabot22 Posted July 17, 2013 i love the idea of the island being a desert and i love the way you portayed the island with abounded plants and the way joker is wanting to sort it out when are you posting more photos and the story? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RaincloudDustbin Posted July 17, 2013 Probably one tomorrow. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CorneliusMurdock Posted July 18, 2013 Since you're making a story here, I've moved the topic to BF&C. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
