brickboy12 Posted February 10, 2013 The space-polices new small storage craft the RONSTON is fast and agile it is very manoeuvrable too. I need all the criticism I can get as this is my first space build. Hope you enjoy. (The lances are just to hold it up0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DraikNova Posted February 11, 2013 Well, slightly messy, but a lot better than most of the MOCs out there. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
brickboy12 Posted February 11, 2013 I agree with that. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gory51 Posted February 12, 2013 My honest criticism, I would say.....its a bit blocky and the large number of square edges are too plain ( for me). Try substituting those bigger block pieces with smaller pieces that have different shapes/edges and details etc. Also try experiment a bit with some SNOT techniques. ;) i also suck at Photography, but one thing I do know, strong light is better than a flash, and if you have to use a flash, dont stand square on to your background picture, it gets that reflection coming back. I do like the red white and blue though, so try refine the details, but keep those colours. I think lots of practice just makes us all better. ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites