The Legonater Posted May 19, 2010 Here's the first chapter... *Cue Dramatic music* Commenst are more than welcome. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
General Redwater Posted May 20, 2010 Nice comic! I really like the movie reference. Great job. - General Redwater Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Legonater Posted May 24, 2010 Here's Part 2 to Chapter 1... Aren't Sergents the best confidence builders ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lord Arjay Posted May 24, 2010 Looks good so far. One suggestion would be to add sound effects, like when things go...err boom (need better word here). You know like in comics. The humour you add is quite good. Well done! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Legonater Posted June 1, 2010 (edited) Here's the final part of the first chapter. This one was a bit of a prelim- I put in a few new stuff that I haven't done in the previous entrys- namely the sound effects, whizzing bullets and Glendon's holsters- I'd really like to know what you think of them, and if I should continue with them. Chapter 2 coming soon... Edited June 2, 2010 by The Legonater Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Legonater Posted June 8, 2010 Seriously- any feedback would be nice. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hawkrider Posted June 14, 2010 (edited) Wow you send out more comics then I could count which for good for me I always enjoy good comics is this is one of the best so far. Edited June 14, 2010 by hawkrider Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
