Chris Phipson Posted January 25, 2010 (edited) This is my first post here, so I hope I'm doing this right. Stash, feel free to slap me upside the head if I did this wrong... This is a story moc that I did. It's set near the end of the clone wars. I don't want to give too much away, but if you're interested in what "the incident" was, feel free to click on the links below! Part one Part two Part three Thanks again Jim for helping me out with how to post! I still had to do some creative editing to make it work... but got it in the long run. Phew... ok, enjoy the moc! ~Chris. ~Chris. Edited January 31, 2010 by KimT Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted January 25, 2010 Hey, Chris, welcome to EB! I see you're having trouble deeplinking pictures, but there's a really helpful tutorial for that: Click here. In short, just copy the image location and then click this: in your posting menu. Then paste the image location and click "okay". It should look like this when you're posting: [img=http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10716/12641126471_SPLASH.jpg] So then you can have: Hope this helps! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chris Phipson Posted January 25, 2010 (edited) Hey, Chris, welcome to EB! I see you're having trouble deeplinking pictures, but there's a really helpful tutorial for that:***sniped*** Hope this helps! You sir, are AWESOME! Thanks! I'll see if I can fix it and add a few more images. Thanks for giving the one so that people can at least see a small part of the post. ~ Chris. Edited January 25, 2010 by Chris Phipson Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Cam Posted January 25, 2010 Wow, awesome story and 3 great locations. very fun to read!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lightningtiger Posted January 25, 2010 Excellent story, awesome MOC's - the work of pure genius. I used to write sci-fi when I was a teenager (heck nearly 30 years ago) I find you have written a great story that brings to an end one Jedi's life with the madness of a rouge Clone hell bent on murder - excellent story ! Great work and I'm a conformist! 'JimButcher' ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RepublicForces Posted January 25, 2010 Nice story, great MoCs Excellent story, awesome MOC's - the work of pure genius. I used to write sci-fi when I was a teenager (heck nearly 30 years ago) I find you have written a great story that brings to an end one Jedi's life with the madness of a rouge Clone hell bent on murder - excellent story ! Great work and I'm a conformist! 'JimButcher' ! I think you did the wrong name... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JimBee Posted January 25, 2010 You sir, are AWESOME! Thanks! I'll see if I can fix it and add a few more images. Thanks for giving the one so that people can at least see a small part of the post. ~ Chris. Glad I could help! These comics are very interesting, not what I'd expect from a SW comic, but interesting nonetheless. Very suspenseful, and the conclusion was horrific... but amazingly well presented. The MOCs were excellent as well. Interesting experiment. Great work and I'm a conformist! 'JimButcher' ! I think you did the wrong name... Er, yeah, as much as I would like to take credit for these, I can't. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ratshot Posted January 25, 2010 This is a very nice comic, I really enjoyed reading it Top Work! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RileyC Posted January 25, 2010 I really like the set pictures at the end they look really cool. The story got a bit gory at the end with everyone killing everyone but I thought it was funny . Great work and welcome to EB Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mace Windu Posted January 26, 2010 I saw these all on MOCpages and they are GREAT! The story is the best part, but the scenes come in close second. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pedro Posted January 26, 2010 Great comic Chris, was very entertaining to read and I really like your sets. Though the last chapter was quite dark, not just with Order 66 but the murdering the whole village part - might've been nice to see a couple of kids escaping/surviving - afterall, who reports that there was ever an incident on Tanneth?! Are you planning to do any more? Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with in the future. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chris Phipson Posted January 26, 2010 Great comic Chris, was very entertaining to read and I really like your sets. Though the last chapter was quite dark, not just with Order 66 but the murdering the whole village part - might've been nice to see a couple of kids escaping/surviving - afterall, who reports that there was ever an incident on Tanneth?! Are you planning to do any more? Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with in the future. I always kind of thought that maybe Commander Switch reported that the "evil jedi" wiped out the squad and then slaughtered the refugees. It would sure help the Emperor with that whole "Jedi rebellion" cover story he was going for. Thanks everyone for your comments! I really enjoyed building and writing this story and have already started hashing out ideas for another one. Probably won't get to it till after brickworld though. ~ Chris. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-JD- Posted January 26, 2010 Awesome story Chris! The sets are excellent, and the twists were great too. I'm hoping to see more comics from you soon! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pedro Posted January 26, 2010 I always kind of thought that maybe Commander Switch reported that the "evil jedi" wiped out the squad and then slaughtered the refugees. It would sure help the Emperor with that whole "Jedi rebellion" cover story he was going for. Excellent! You should so add that on as an epilogue. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
