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[GBW] Justice Served - Plighia - Endgame

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Finally Plighia's army has reached the heart of Tosul: after securing the southern mountainous region, and liberating the territory from the presence of Tosul's forces, the largest and most important operation of the campaign was planned even more important than initial invasion. The joint forces of the Fox and Rats divisions have begun deployment in the central lowland of Tosul, and only the Outpost X-Ray intervenes to curb their advance to the major cities. General Roome finds himself commanding the remaining forces at Outpost X-Ray, thanks to the testimony and intelligence gathered at the Bronholm Research Center, Tosul's last forces would have no intention of counterattacking, or at least not in a conventional way. In fact, thanks to the information gathered, we know that Roome is in possession of an instrument capable of subverting the war in progress, and of indiscriminately hitting every allied nation, both civil and military. this weapon is a powerful and destructive computer virus that needs to be uploaded to the satellite network in order to be transmitted. Fortunately, our UAV's communications jam coverage has not yet allowed them to download it to satellites. Plighia's joint forces are ready for action to attack and destroy Tosul's remaining forces at the Outpost X-Ray in quadrant D-7, and put an end to all trouble. We are at the endgame.

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Tosul's forces are on alert, enemy presence in the area has been confirmed, and an imminent attack is expected.

*A nearby explosion, a column of smoke is seen rising, alarm sirens sound throughout the base*

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Tosul soldier 1: "Sir, the enemy army has just breached the perimeter of the base in several places, we are under attack from the east, west and south, they are moving fast towards the main buildings!"

Gen. Roome: "Damn! Everyone to the fighting posts! protect the base, they will pay dearly for their insolence and regret having invaded us, the whole world will regret this war!"

Tosul soldier 2: "General, the enemy air forces are preventing us from evacuating from the exits north of the base, the escape routes have been cut! Furthermore, we are still unable to reconnect with the capital to ask for help, the enemy electronic disturbances block our communication."

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Tosul soldier 3: "Get ready, enemy heavy tanks approaching the east entrance!"

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Tosul soldier 3: "Open fire!!"

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Cpt. Parms: "Go! Go! Go! deploy in attack formation! you three to the right, you others, follow me to the left, towards the main entrance! Beware of the fire from above, they have good snipers! IFV will protect us and support our advance!"

*IFV open fire versus the enemy ACV, which receives severe damage*

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*ACV explodes, the IFV focus the fire on the infantry*

Cpt. Parms: "t's our chance to advance, beware of enemy fire, be precise and lethal."

 
Lt. Nose: "Damn! Cpl. Hoover got hit, man down!"
 
Cpt. Parms: "At the moment we cannot do anything for him, we must advance and complete the mission, having secured the outside we will provide relief!"
 
Pvt. Samantha: "I've reached the door, see what I can do to open it!"
 
Sgt. Camel: "Focus the fire on the balcony, he is the sniper!"
 
 
Lt. Nose: "Safe outdoor area! Beware of roofs and windows! I help Hoover!"
 
Cpt. Parms: "We enter through the two doors, from above and below, to trap General Roome, break in, hit hard, neutralize every enemy and capture the general and the computer virus!"
 
Pvt. Gouda: "Third Fox Squadron reporting, Captain! We managed to capture several buildings to the south, I was sent in support with Sgt. Flame to this unit, as the Cpt. Label was unable to find General Roome who is presumed to be hiding in this wing of the complex."
 
Cpt. Parms: "Two extra pairs of hands won't hurt! We lost a man, and the more the better!"
 
 
Cpt. Parms: "Well, we're ready to break-in! On my way!"
 
 
Tosul soldier 2: "General, the helicopter on the roof is ready for evacuation, we will try to cover it as we can and draw the enemy fire on us, to allow you to escape."
 
Gen. Roome: "Perfect, as soon as i reach Rifrac, safely, I will upload the virus on the net and then the world will fall into chaos."

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Cpt. Parms: "Break-in!"

*A violent firefight begins, while Gen. Roome heads for the roof, escorted.*

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Lt. Nose: "Captain, the helicopter on the roof is ready to take off, General Roome is fleeing!"

Cpt. Parms: "Quick! We have to get to the roof before he leaves, we have to catch him alive!"

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Pvt. Gouda: "All floor clear!"

Pvt. Samantha: "From the computer activity history, they transferred the virus to a pen-drive, probably the general has it, what should we do captain?"

Cpt. Parms: "We're going to catch him! To the roof!"

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Cpt. Parms: "NO! He managed to take off! Damn, I'm forced to plan B ... Air support, can you hear me? Order 91, you have the green light. Shoot down General Roome's helicopter."

LSH pilot: "Here Papa-04, Order received, we have eye contact, in position."

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Gen. Roome: "Do they really want to take me down ?!"

LSH pilot: "Argo-9 missile out!"

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*Gen. Roome Helicopter explodes, killing him*

LSH pilot: "Tango's down!"

Cpt. Parms: *sigh* "I finally hope this war ends now, too much blood has been shed ... Let's hope we're at the endgame. We hope that the world will return in peace, but I am afraid that this conflict is only the prelude to a new and greater world conflict ..."

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Judges’ comments…

Okay so I'm going to start by saying your real effort here was put into the vehicles. The terrain and building seemed more like they were quickly thrown together. That said, your vehicles are outstanding! Great detail to every inch. Your score was docked a little for your effort on the overall build, but dont let that come as a negative with the work on those vehicles! You didn't need to do this many builds so, perhaps you could have wrapped a few of them into one more solid effort with the vehicles? I hope we'll see in the future. Great job!      

PROS: A nice story with a well continuity in your sum of your builds. Also, the vechicles are much detailed and gives a strong dosage of action and same is the feeling of the helicopters dogfight. Of course for another one time, the building is well builded with alot small playable details to watch

CONS: the helicopters although are a nice idea, I think they needed more eford about their details and needed to be a bigger size

UGGESTIONS: Even if your builds overall is much above the average speaking for quality, the repetitive same building style may be tiring. Maybe you should try something different, like a building with less high and more wide or a higher ground 

 

Be Sure to Update Your AARs. 

Thanks for playing!

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