[Factions Ep. 2] [S12 - Aylayl - BS] The ancient Sith Temple [O19 - Svivren]

[dvogon]

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Back in the days of the Old Republic there were many old Sith temples, with all traces lost but some vague references.

A Jedi scout has moved to Aylayl in the search of one of them.

We've found a strange mine...

Wait! There is blood around the boxes! Be careful!

I'll take this mine crawler out to investigate inside

Strange place... there are some kind of eggs here. Some appear to be opening! Cannot smell worse...

There is a dark tunnel there. Wait! We aren't alone!!!

Oh, my.... argh!!!

Damn! This monster is quite angry!!

On my way... gosh!!

Lightsabers aren't enough, this monster is going to be difficult to kill!

How fast it moves! It has disappeared inside the mine. Don't want to go there... at least not now... 

Are you OK? --Yes, almost!!

We've found one! These are the stairs to an ancient Sith Temple.

There is a big entrance over there. It seems abandoned, but be careful!

The temple still has energy. That's strange...

Wait! One Sith is coming out from the mine...

Mmm... two more Sith Lords over there. No, the temple isn't abandoned... yet

This temple is more important than what we though. What secrets could be hidden there? 

Don't think too much now and watch out those red lightsabers! Attack all at once!!

Miserable Jedi! What the hell are you doing here?

Our temple is only open to the dark side!

Do you just want to die, poor Jedi?

Not at all, Sith bastards!! At least not yet!

We see, insignificant Jedis... 

But beware, entering into a sacred Sith temple will not be that easy...

(To be continued...)

Spoiler

Here are some additional shots:

The ancient Sith Temple at Aylayl.

The mine with the seed pieces.

The mine entrance, with one of the crawler print pieces out. Most of asymmetries are done with those jumpers.

The mine and the tree with the rocks roofs out for better children playing.

The mine monster and the mine crawler.

And finally, the Jedi and Sith characters.

 

 

[Professor Thaum]

Sorry but I see no pictures (probably my PC - it seems unfit at the moment)

EDIT : pictures seen from my phone : my PC sucks

That's a great temple. I especially like the curved path from the cave to the temple.

This built is quite huge, what is the footprint ?

[dvogon]

I can see them, but maybe it should be another member the one to confirm that the images can be seen.

[Jody Meyer]

Seen, what a great build, and story line start 

[Professor Thaum]

18 hours ago, dvogon said:

I can see them, but maybe it should be another member the one to confirm that the images can be seen.

That was all my old PC fault

[dvogon]

On 7/1/2019 at 4:37 PM, Jody Meyer said:

Seen, what a great build, and story line start 

Thanks! I have some ideas to extend it in the future.

On 7/1/2019 at 11:10 AM, Professor Thaum said:

That's a great temple. I especially like the curved path from the cave to the temple.

This built is quite huge, what is the footprint ?

Thanks! The footprint is a 48x48 gray base plate. It is indeed big, specially for what I'm used to build. It has enough space for smaller builds, like the mine. 

Trying non conventional angles was the funniest part. They make the build more believable.

[MKJoshA]

Those are great stairs!

[goatman461]

I agree that the stairway is a great part of this build. I think there are other areas that  could use more attention or better presentation, but the overall structure of the build and ice-cream-as-eggs part usage is good. I think you should try to scale back and focus on capturing your build in a single, clean shot. Keep it up.