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[marvelBoy123]

General Map D2

Hello and welcome to Alsarh today, your latest news from our glorious nation and beyond!

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Today we are joined by President Dmitrievich himself on this sad day for our nation.

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This Morning our Nekrosavov Hydro-Dam - although small a well known symbol of our new government and their project to make our nation great again - fell victim of an attack 

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The dam produces electricity through groundbreaking technology and innovation 

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... and is home to numerous marine species

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The Terrorists from the Walara Dominance State or WDS took positions around the dam planning to destroy the entire dam causing flooding downstream.

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Led by a man known as Dusk they are ruthless fanatics who are trying to force our nation into their conflict through acts of violence

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For this operation they are well equipped with RPGs and TNT.

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Thankfully the dam was being guarded by General Zaytsev and a fellow soldier

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...who spotted the attack

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...and eliminated the rebel with the TNT.

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However they were unable to eliminate all the rebels and an Rocket was fired at the dam

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The two soldiers managed to escape the dam

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...but were unable to prevent its destruction.

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Three people were killed and five being treated for injuries, due to debris being carried down the river. The remote villages of Glavo and Podokutsk were without electricity for multiple hours and other dams downstream have suffered damage.

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The insurgent responsible for the dams destruction was killed in a firefight afterwards but Dusk is still at large. The President will address this issue at the Brick of Nations later today.

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And that is the headlines for now be sure to tune in later for further information.

 

 

 

 

 

Edited February 24, 2019 by marvelBoy123

[TheBeeze]

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Judges’ comments…

This build has a lot more going on than the prior ones. The dam concept is nice. You could focus on showing water moving or maybe a little texturing along the bank there. Again I do need to stress the photos. You might benefit from better lighting to really bring out the details in your pictures. Also, don't get carried away making multiple builds in a short period of time. I know your anxious to gain some points, but quality over quantity my friend. Nice work!    

This is a very detailed build, which is good.  But I see some areas that are very detailed and other areas lacking.  A dam should have a fairly active bed of water and there is nothing going on.  Let's see some ripples/waves/foam; anything to draw me in!  The hill to the left was good.  Try to use smaller pieces to create a large area.  Example, you have 2 different shades of gray going on in the dam at first glance...light grey and light bluish grey (light bley).  This can add a ton of detail when used properly.  Instead of big stripes of color differences, go with the 'less is more' idea.  Sprinkle it in, and then if you need to, go back and add some more.  The light wasn't as great in other builds of yours, but the close up shots really show how dirty your blue plate is.  Be sure to wash it, or dust it as that really makes a build look bad.

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