alexandertam Posted April 12, 2008 (edited) Hi, It has been a long time that I have not written anything(I mean in Eurobricks). I had made this story, after I've watch this video: But, I've changed the ending. I hope you will enjoy it. How Britain claimed India. ~THE END~ Please give me some suggestions or replies. And at last again, thanks for watching, thanks! Edited April 12, 2008 by phred Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 12, 2008 (edited) Good, A few Comments: 1. How Britain Claimed India. (Look at the Title) 2. Britain Had much more Honour than that 3. Eddie Izzards funny, but weird 4. The Genreal says, Lend it, you meen Lent from?5. Why so many Ellipses? Joey Edited April 12, 2008 by Joey Lock Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alexandertam Posted April 12, 2008 Good, A few Comments:1. How Britain Claimed India. (Look at the Title) 2. Britain Had much more Honour than that 3. Eddie Izzards funny, but weird 4. The Genreal says, Lend it, you meen Lent from?5. Why so many Ellipses? Joey� � Sorry... I meant to be funny.... I can't change the title. I should preview it before I post, so careless I am... thanks for your comment. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 12, 2008 Sorry... I meant to be funny.... I can't change the title. I should preview it before I post, so careless I am... thanks for your comment. Im not saying its bad, I was just saying about the Spelling Funny though! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mister Phes Posted April 12, 2008 Sorry... I meant to be funny.... I can't change the title. I should preview it before I post, so careless I am... thanks for your comment. But I can and it will take me a mere 10 seconds! I'll have a look at your comic after I've finished my current task. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlueBard Posted April 12, 2008 (edited) 2. Britain Had much more Honour than that Edited April 12, 2008 by BlueBard Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 12, 2008 You having a pop at my Country? Joey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlueBard Posted April 12, 2008 You having a pop at my Country? Joey No, I was just thinking on Gandhi... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nikola Bathory Posted April 12, 2008 This is great and actually that's how colonization was carried out! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Capn Frank Posted April 12, 2008 Sorry... I meant to be funny.... I can't change the title. I should preview it before I post, so careless I am... thanks for your comment. I liked it. If you edit your first post you can edit the title of the thread. Plus i think Joey was talking about the little title above your first pic that i've fixed for ya. You having a pop at my Country? What's wrong with soda pop in India? I'm confused. P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 12, 2008 What's wrong with soda pop in India? I'm confused. Has no one seen Only fools and Horses before?! If you havent, you should, It will help you understand me more... In case you need to know: Delboy- Right Trigger- Middle Boycie- Left Good old british Comedy... Joey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MagPiesRUs Posted April 12, 2008 Nice, a good summary of European colonisation, and I really liked some of the camera shots 4. The Genreal says, Lend it, you meen Lent from?5. Why so many Ellipses? I believe you mean 'general' and 'mean' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 12, 2008 Nice, a good summary of European colonisation, and I really liked some of the camera shots I believe you mean 'general' and 'mean' Shhh! Dont ruin me or Ill kill you Ill ruin you! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mister Phes Posted April 14, 2008 That's quite an amusing history lesson! What gave you the inspiration for this? Are you originally from Britain, Alexandertam? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
alexandertam Posted April 14, 2008 That's quite an amusing history lesson! What gave you the inspiration for this? Are you originally from Britain, Alexandertam? I aren't originally from Britain, I am a Chinese who come to England to study on board. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 14, 2008 I aren't originally from Britain, I am a Chinese who come to England to study on board. Sorry I just like correcting people "I am not Originally" Got any Corrections TinyPies? Huh? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SlyOwl Posted April 14, 2008 Hehe! Some of the shots are a little blurry/out of focus in places though... I aren't originally from Britain, I am a Chinese who come to England to study on board. Sorry I just like correcting people "I am not Originally" Got any Corrections TinyPies? Huh? I do! The whole thing should read: I am not originally from Britain, but I am Chinese and came to England to study (on board? ) Take that, TinyPies! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fluyt Posted April 14, 2008 (edited) Hehe! Some of the shots are a little blurry/out of focus in places though... Sorry I just like correcting people "I am not Originally" Got any Corrections TinyPies? Huh? I do! The whole thing should read: I am not originally from Britain, but I am Chinese and came to England to study (on board? ) Take that, TinyPies! "On board" is supposed to be "abroad" (at least that would seem to be the most logical solution). And yes, there are probably some comments on my grammar/spelling as well, I know I'm far from perfect . But just like alexandertam I have the excuse of not being English/American/Australian Anyways, nice comic, are you planning on making more? (like other "native encounters") Edited April 14, 2008 by Fluyt Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SlyOwl Posted April 14, 2008 American/Australian Ahem? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iamded Posted April 15, 2008 Sorry I just like correcting people"I am not Originally" Got any Corrections TinyPies? Huh? Well actually, that shouldn't be a capitol 'o'. This is a neat and funny comic you got here, alexandertam! Great job! ~Peace Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Joey Lock Posted April 16, 2008 Well actually, that shouldn't be a capitol 'o'. This is a neat and funny comic you got here, alexandertam! Great job! ~Peace It shouldnt be a Capitol, its Capital. A Capitol is a statehouse in the USA! (At least that is what it said in the dictionary) Joey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SlyOwl Posted April 16, 2008 It shouldnt be a Capitol, its Capital.A Capitol is a statehouse in the USA! (At least that is what it said in the dictionary) If you're so clever, then you should know that "admin" takes the indefinite article "an", not "a". This applies to all words beginning with a vowel, apart from where it makes the sound "yoo", for example "a unicorn". This also applies to words that begin with a constonant, but have a vowel sound, for example "an hour". Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
