de Gothia Posted July 28, 2018 (edited) Lena woke up in a wagon, with big bars preveting her from escape. She looked outside and saw the forests of Avalonia. When she saw the waterfall, where de Gothia had taken her som time ago, she knew that they were taking her west... She hoped that someone could come and rescue her but the forest was so quiet, only the soldiers talking to each other broke the silence. But all the forests in Avalonia are full of eyes... Really love the cart design from crusaders! I wanted to this in new colours so let me know what you think! Edited July 28, 2018 by de Gothia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LM71Blackbird Posted July 29, 2018 Beautifully created model! The build has a really nice 'foresty' feel to it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zoth33 Posted July 30, 2018 Nice little scene. I like the wagon looks good. The landscaping is great. The trees are well done. I like the way waterfall comes through the rocks looks very organic. The rockwork is excellent too. Nice job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Grover Posted July 30, 2018 First, Let me say that I really like the whole scene. In particular, I like the waterfall. You and Kai just did two really good waterfalls that I think feel organic and look realistic, which is awesome. I am really enjoying reading your stories to go along with your builds, too. The trees, color choices, and the flow of the stream looks great. Thanks for sharing! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KevinyWu Posted July 30, 2018 The balance of the types of vegetation is really good, I'm definitely going to take some notes on this! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kai NRG Posted July 30, 2018 Glad to see that Lena is not being left to her fate! Looking forward to what happens next! And great job with the vegetation on this MOC; I really like the colors with the yellow tree and orange/dark red bushes! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Puvel Posted July 31, 2018 Lovely looking landscape! Great colour scheme in there, and the placement is well thought out Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mccoyed Posted August 1, 2018 Great scene. Love the forest scout hiding in there, that's a great shot. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Niku Posted August 1, 2018 I really like the transition between the water colors from blue to transparent clear. Nicely done DG. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gideon Posted August 3, 2018 Nice scene overall and great homage to an iconic classic set! (Which happens to be the first castle set I got as a kid ) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soccerkid6 Posted August 6, 2018 (edited) Typically gorgeous, lush Avalonian landscape! That waterfall design is both super effective, and parts efficient Great touch to have a rock splitting the water at the bottom too. And the crusader's cart is a great design, John and I had one and kept it together for quite some time before stealing the wheels I'm intrigued to see the storyline progress! Edited August 6, 2018 by soccerkid6 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
de Gothia Posted August 6, 2018 Thanks for your kind words everyone! I have the next (big!) moc up for photos but river Avonmora needs more water!! So, either I photoshop the water and my wife will let me sleep in the bed or I buy more trans clear round 1x1 and sleep on the couch... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Stad Posted August 6, 2018 This, like all your others, is another beautifully realized installment in your exciting story. Really looking forward to the next chapter! Just remember, couch-sleeping is temporary, trans clear round 1x1s are forever... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tezclatipoca Posted August 7, 2018 Nice Avalonian feeling ! I really like the atmosphere you gave here ! And the cart is fine too... A good modernisation of the old crusader one. good job ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
de Gothia Posted August 7, 2018 Thanks guys! the stad: hahaha! I have to remember that! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Henjin_Quilones Posted August 9, 2018 The landscape is very nice, dG! I love the way you have made it chaotic like a real forest without it being too busy and cluttered visually. It makes a very good backdrop for the scene in the corner. Hopefully Lena will be rescued soon! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TitusV Posted August 14, 2018 Oh no, Lena! Send word if you need help, dG I'm really liking the vegetation, very Avalonian, and the wagon is fine too, and the figs are cool, and... I think the only things I'm no fan of are the reddish brown tiles you've topped the black border slopes off with. They seem a bit bright, maybe normal black may have looked better? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
de Gothia Posted August 15, 2018 Hehe, we will have to see where they are sending her. Might need help to rescue her from other Lords and knights in Historica! :) Thanks! And yes you are perhaps right about the borders! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
