Hart New Bob Posted September 16, 2017 (edited) Tell me how you like it. C&C is always welcomed. EDIT: I might rewrite this someday. (I also put it in spoiler tags) Spoiler Warning: It may not be up to my new personnel standards! Narrator: Sometime during the 18th century, in the Caribbean. On a dock. Seller: Are you the Quartermaster "Michael Keys"? Mike: Yes, what do you want? Seller: It is very, very important. (Fake chough) I have to talk to Captain Black I, I have a real map, of a treasure. Mike: Oh really? Seller: Yes! It is hidden on a volcanic island, that’s why I’m afraid to go there. Mike: I can understand that. Seller: A, oh yes, ha ha, I’m afraid. But Captain Black and you are a couple of brave guys. I’ll sell the map to you for 500. Nah? Mike: Hey, look over to our ship. Seller: Why that? What’s up with it? Mike: You’ll notice in a moment. Just look, and go a little closer to the harbour wall. Just so, that’s good. Seller: Hmm…I can’t see anything. Mike: Now it comes. (Mike kicks the map seller into the water and grabs the map.) Seller: Argh! Black: Hey, what is going on? Did someone fall into the water? Mike: He probably stumbled or something. But look I have a treasure map! Black: What does it lead to? A chest of gold? I don't recognize any island on this map. Mike: Maybe we should take it to a cartographer. Black: let's do it. Narrator: Later.... Cartographer: this map looks incredibly fake to me. It doesn't have any color to it at tall. Black: Well thank you. (walks out) I think he's lying Mike: Yeah he looks shifty to Me. Narrator: later, at the soldier's tavern Cartographer: lieutenant? Brickington: yes? What do you want? Cartographer: I have a map. Brickington: Where and what does it lead to? And how did you get it? Cartographer: I redrew it from a map some pirates had. Brickington: What pirates? Redbeard? Iron-hook? Foul? Cartographer: Black. Brickington: Oh him. (sigh) well, I guess it's a bit ahead of their time anyway. Who were the other pirates? Cartographer: Well there was only one, he was the Quartermaster. His name was um Mike uh Mike Keys Brickington: give me that. (Gives him the map) And here is some coins for your trouble. Cartographer: Thank you Sir. Narrator: Later, on the ship. Black: Quartermaster! Mike: Aye aye! Black: Do you remember who I told you sold us this ship? Mike: Yes, I think it was Captain Redbeard. Why would you ask? Black: I.... Lookout: Ships ahoy! Black: Who is it? Lookout: Looks like it's Brickington on the Sea Parrot and a small naval ship. Black: Sound like it will be a fair fight. Brickington: Sargent White, get me my speaking trumpet. White: Here you go sir. (speaks into speaking trumpet) Brickington:(clears throat) I, Lt. Brickington command all of you pirates too give yourself up or face extreme punishment. Black: No. Brickington: Then we will need to use abrasive actions, fire the signal! Soldier: Yes sir. (fires) Narrator: several ships come from a bay. Black: Hoist the sails! All hands on deck! Raise the anchor! Narrator: What will happen to our "Heros" next? find out in the next exiting post! Edited May 21, 2018 by Hart New Bob Quartermaster..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LegoRacer1 Posted September 16, 2017 Fantastic story. Can't wait for the next. Though maybe a little micro MOC photo to help the the story would be good. Just my thoughts. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hart New Bob Posted September 16, 2017 (edited) On 9/15/2017 at 7:52 PM, LEGORACER1 said: Fantastic story. Can't wait for the next. Though maybe a little micro MOC photo to help the the story would be good. Just my thoughts. Thank you! I'm also writing a WIP Classic Space story with Legomonorailfan, you can find it in my signature! I might do something like that someday! More to come. Edited December 7, 2017 by Hart New Bob MOR Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
