Isundir Posted February 12, 2017 (edited) Previously on The Adventures of Lupin 'the Mad Dog' Vandimion :Part 1:The Mad DogPart 2:Tally-ho!Part 3: No-Man's Keep Looking back I've led a pretty content life, married my childhood sweetheart from the village. Had to join the Avalonian militia for a while, but survived the few battles I'd seen and when I returned home bought a small plot of land, start a family. So I managed to build a hovel from the wood and stone around us, we didn't have much in the way of possesions, but we had eachother and that was enough for us. Until that accursed day, my mind was so foggy, like a darkness surrounded me and when I came to... She was dead, my dagger, her blood, something sickening, something twisted, did I kill her? I killed her?! Each night, the same dream, the same terror. Can only death redeem me now, do I still have a purpose in this mad world. Edited February 12, 2017 by Isundir Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TitusV Posted February 12, 2017 Though I'm not completely sold on tan as a colour for the floor, I really like the fireplace, which is in my eyes the best part of the build Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Henjin_Quilones Posted February 12, 2017 A simple, yet effective, vignette. I like the clean look of the build and the uncluttered composition. The tan color looks like a nice maple hardwood floor, or really any wood relatively freshly hewn or lacquered, so if that is what you were going for you succeeded. The black figure in the corner gives me the creeps, though. And is the baby still alive? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Maestro Posted February 12, 2017 I really like the plain walls and floor although maybe a little more texture may be in need. The items scattered around and the fire place are defetintly my favourite parts. That black figure in the corner is creepy, hope we can see him in the back ground of more story builds Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leonardo da Bricki Posted February 13, 2017 That fireplace is neat,good use of the wheel arch. I agree with TitusV, the tan floor is nice, but doesn't seem quite right. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blufiji Posted February 13, 2017 The tan floor I think, should've formed the entire base of the build, but other than that this is a wonderful vignette and a great read. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LittleJohn Posted February 14, 2017 Nice build, I like the blankets on the floor, and the fireplace is excellent Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soccerkid6 Posted February 16, 2017 Very sad story, well accompanied by an excellent interior The capes for bed roll is a neat design. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
