Cody Startale Posted December 2, 2016 (edited) Still working on thread details and dialogue, please be patient while I will update the thread. Story version, view this if you like my story: Cody: So, are we leaving or what? Alia: Yeah, finally. The sooner we leave here, the better. Cody: I agree. I can't wait to... WOAH! What's that?! Alia: That's my personal fighter – the Tyto! Isn't it just the most beautiful thing you've ever seen? Cody: ... you've built that yourself, haven't you? Alia: Yes, so you better don't make fun of it. Let's hurry and get aboard already. Alia: Rookie, meet my most trusted flight companion... RT-80! Artie: Weeeoop! Alia: Really? ... Artie has identified someone who has witnessed our encounter with Ruw Zabro. It seems he recorded us and took off immediately after! Alia: Hurry! We might just catch up to him! VROOOOOM Alia: That's the ship! Cody, quick, run a scan on him! Scanner's in the rear! Cody: Identifies as the personal ship f "Calo Parac"... who's been identified as a Black Sun agent!! Alia: Let's see where he's going, shall we? Vrrrrrrt BANG Alia: Alright! Spy device is in place, just in time before he made his jump into hyperspace. We'll follow him, and once he's back in normal space, we can also intercept his transmissions! Comm Unit: zzzzzztt ... Zabro's hideout! I'm bringing you evidence of Alliance involvement, meet you at the surface! Zzzztt... Alia: That's Mon Calamari! That's where Parac is headed! Cody: Kinda looks like Naboo, doesn't it? Alia: Command, here is Lt. Brynna! We've chased a known Black Sun agent who has identified us in a covert operation on Commenor all the way to Mon Cal! He's about to rat us out! Comm Unit: Lieutenant, this is Rieekan. Your target is on our hitlist. Engage, I repeat: engage! Don't let him get away! Alia: Got it!PEW PEW Cody: You've got him! He's crashlanded on that small island! Alia: He's not getting away! Alia: Stay where you are! It's over! Alia: Ha! Cody: Watch out! He's got a blaster! Alia: Oh no, you don't! KICK Thug: Urrgh! SPLASH Alia: Where do you think you're going?! Alia: Trying to rat us out, eh? It was your last mistake, scum! Alia: You'll never... mess with me... again! Huff, huff, huff Alia: ... what are you looking at? Alia: Do you think we're playing games here? Remember, this is a war. Although getting your hands dirty probably isn't as easy as simply pulling a trigger. Is it? Alia: Let's go. Raw images for judgement: This was my inspiration for Mon Calamari, rather than what's depicted in TCW or the likes. Edited December 2, 2016 by Cody Startale added missing dialogue, repaired formatting and broken spoiler tags, added inspiration image of Mon Calamari Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MKJoshA Posted December 2, 2016 Amazing! I love your take on Mon Cala. And your micro version of your real ship is a great touch. Good work! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kodan Black Posted December 2, 2016 Yeah, the micros of the full size ships was a great touch. Love the way you have him floating arms out at the end, very nice touch. I like the facial expressions that work well with the story. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LucasLaughing Posted December 2, 2016 " Cody: Kinda looks like Naboo, doesn't it? " I wish they still made the Planets sets - they work so well for space scenes. Great job on the builds and story - your minifig posing is excellent, and I really like that shot with three pictures of Alia's face while she's drowning the rat, as well as the dialogue with Cody that follows. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goatman461 Posted December 5, 2016 Cool ship. Interesting action shots and paneling Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Puvel Posted December 5, 2016 Excellent pics! For some reason the VROOOM shot made me smile The RT-80 is nicely build too. The actions shots are very well done as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
