Lady K Posted July 24, 2016 (edited) Date: 24 Julali 3816 Location: C04 - Aeristus Mission: Scout Terrain (Authorized).......exchange of trade goods (unauthorized) Tags: Military Building, Engineering Previously on Rebel With A Cause...... Hey Kia, who's your new friend? Hi Rex. This is ORB. Hello Rex. I am ORB, a highly trained warrior with many talents permanently assigned to Lady Kianna! Right, I get it....looks like you haven't lost your talent to attract wayward robots Kia. Greeting ORB of the new AI. Oh great, you haven't changed. Seems like your permanent cause is to cause me a great deal of trouble! You know it is Ba....Kia. What was that your were about to say?.....It was Babe wasn't it...you know how I feel about that! Kia, Kia Kia....you know I respect your professional side way to much for that. Hmmm...ok fine...this time. I see you haven't failed at getting me the parts I need for my ship. And we have some old outdated communication cubes for you, highly collectible for trading for.....the unique hard to find items we need. Oh Wow! I would really like to ride this.....maybe in my combat form...... Combat form!? Yes combat form and he really is formidable......when he behaves himself that is....... Lady Kianna....I really don't know what you are talking about....I always behave myself... Hmm........ Lady Kianna, will the new parts help us to find meaning in our lives? Find meaning in your lives? Seriously Kia.....I thought we settled that when we were young and training aboard the Obsidian? What is he talking about? Ugh! Ok fine! I feel as though all our missions don't make sense...there is no connection....no story behind it if you will....something is missing. So the new ship will help us bend time/space to find the relevance of what we have been doing.... Oh great...here we go again..... to see how each mission fits with the previous one or the next one.... Kia.....Babe.... ? and find some sort of.....I don't know....story behind it all. Then everything will be.... BABE... ? in it's appropriate place and time. So....that's why we need the parts! Really Kia....you need to get out more and have fun. Too many serious clandestine missions really messes up proper brain function you know! Go riding with me...you do still ride don't you? Don't You? Um, well, it just that I have been really really busy on very important missions for the Council Of Five....so..... Right......Well, when your ready, you know where to find me. Thanks for the comm cubes. See ya round ORB. Later ...... Lady Kianna, what is 'Babe' ? What does it mean? What? Wait,...why do you ask ORB? Because Rex called you Babe. He What!? He called you Babe....twice. HE WHAT!? Um, called you babe....twice...why is the connect tunnel suddenly darker....? Babe.....twice......fine if thats how he wants things.....I'll show him who's not to be called Babe when I kick his As..... Where does this tunnel lead anyway...I don't think I have ever been down here before...not that I am trying to distract you or change the subject or anything.... Hmmm....you will see..... Oh, my where are we? And what is that you are carrying? And why didn't I see it before? This my friend it at the bottom of the research station hidden on Aeristus. This room is a combination wind tunnel and vertical wind tunnel for testing military equipment in flying conditions. Today we will use it for.......well you'll see. Go over to the two control panels and flip those switches. Ok. This will be easy breezy.....no matter how many years it has been....watch out mr. smart as.... Ready Lady Kianna. Flip the switches ORB! YES! I knew it would be easy......NO NO NO LADY KIANNA! I'm fine......just straightened up too much.....I think... Let's go again! Balance, girl, balance......BALANCE... UGH, UGH, UGH.......balance, yea right! Lady Kianna, are you sure this is safe? Shouldn't you be wearing safety gear of some sort? I mean you said you were younger then........ ORB....don't finish that sentence. Age has nothing to do with it....really....! Again! Ok....focus, focus, focus and balance.....I.....have.....got....this......! ORB.... hit the sound system...... and dim the lights.......Oh Yeah! Lady Kianna, are you sure that's a good idea? Yes ORB....and don't distract me....this really isn't as easy as it looks... Ok, ORB....kill the main lights...and turn up the music! Ok.....I think. YES! Rebellion is here......watch out Rex, because I do know where to find you....... Sorry for the long post. I thought it was time for some back story on Lady Kianna. Hope you enjoyed it. C&C always welcome. Edited July 27, 2016 by Lady K Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LucByard Posted July 24, 2016 I can't criticise a long post Happily read the whole thing and enjoyed how you've seeded where your story may be going. Love the integration of the trans light blue; it doesn't interfere with the MANTIS undertones. Looking forward to more. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dannylonglegs Posted July 25, 2016 Interesting! Is Kianna going to have an overarching plotline? Fun story and great build! Super glad to see you back and bricking! Nice work illuminating the whole thing too! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady K Posted July 26, 2016 (edited) I can't criticise a long post Happily read the whole thing and enjoyed how you've seeded where your story may be going. Love the integration of the trans light blue; it doesn't interfere with the MANTIS undertones. Looking forward to more. Thank you. Glad you liked the story, it was about time I started to connect the builds. I liked how the light trans blue worked out. Interesting! Is Kianna going to have an overarching plotline? Fun story and great build! Super glad to see you back and bricking! Nice work illuminating the whole thing too! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Thanks. You picked up on the mysterious plot. I tried a different lighting technique for dark (underground) shots. It didn't turn out as well as I had hoped but it did work. Just wish I had done better with the photography. Edited July 26, 2016 by Lady K Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mesabi Posted July 27, 2016 (edited) Hey, don't forget to add the tags to the post. I think you could toss on an exploration tag too since some of it is outside. or maybe an experiment tag since its a whole portal thing. Edited July 27, 2016 by Mesabi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady K Posted July 27, 2016 (edited) Hey, don't forget to add the tags to the post. I think you could toss on an exploration tag too since some of it is outside. or maybe an experiment tag since its a whole portal thing. Thank you! I had added it in the main title when posting but forgot to include it in the post. Judges: if I added the tag on the main post too late for scoring, I'll understand. Edited July 27, 2016 by Lady K Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted July 28, 2016 The judges awarded you 5 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady K Posted July 29, 2016 The judges awarded you 5 points. Thank you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Professor Thaum Posted July 29, 2016 like the story... and that's a great built the dance floor for hoverboard clash a lot Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Merc4Hire Posted July 30, 2016 Fun read, characters feel very natural, and that platform along with the added lights looks really great! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady K Posted July 30, 2016 like the story... and that's a great built the dance floor for hoverboard clash a lot Thank you. The floor does clash, but I wanted something a little different than what I normally do. Fun read, characters feel very natural, and that platform along with the added lights looks really great! Thanks. Glad you liked the build and the story as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
