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Brickwolf

[COR-starting challenge] the march to the port

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The Queen´s Rifles have orders to deploy to the Colonies.

Lt.Wolf and his men are marching through the beautiful Corrington landscape to the port of embarkation.

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Nice troops, Brickwolf - It will be interesting to see what missions they will embark upon when they reach the new world! pirate_satisfied.gif

The composition of the build is nice too, with the path in the foreground and the halfwall and plants in the background. However, I would suggest more texturing of the landscape. For instance building up the landscape so that the path is lower than the surrounding landscape. At the same time, fewer straight lines would look nice too. Although Corrington science is bound to result in straighter roads than in other lands! pirate_tong.gif

All in all, nice little vignette, but it could use some more work. Keep it up! pir_laugh2.gif

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This is a nice classic scene, but some more details would be nice as previously mentioned. I think the straight road is fine, but some stones or varying surfaces would be nice, and some grass or other plants would fill out more of the landscape. The rock wall is definitely a good feature.

Glad to have you in Corrington! :classic:

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