mediumsnowman Posted November 1, 2015 (edited) Location: H04 - Crofter's Ridge (The time machine is currently located on H04, and the traveler is tied to the machine) Tags: Land Vehicle, Space Vehicle Previously... Credit Where It Is Due The Wrong Hands Chasing Time Aketi Outpost, a bustling city located on the edge of the Milky Way galaxy. 1st Novembrinali, AD 3800. *bazoomp* *flash of blinding light that I'm too lazy to edit in* Jebediah O'Reilly: "Oof!" Jebediah O'Reilly: "Where am I? Maybe the question I should be asking is when am I?" Jebediah O'Reilly: "Let's figure out the basics, then I can get down to business. Let's hope Blendin hasn't lost his head..." Bank Attendant: "Welcome to City Bank. How may I help you?" Jebediah O'Reilly: "What's the date today?" Bank Attendant: "The date? It's Novembrinali 1st, of course." Jebediah O'Reilly: "Yes, yes, I know that, but the year?" Bank Attendant: "3800 AD, what else would it be?" Jebediah O'Reilly: "It worked... Thank you." Intercom: "Bank closes in 5 minutes." Jebediah O'Reilly: "Closing already? It's the middle of the day!" Bank Attendant: "You haven't heard? An organization calling themselves the Serpent's Head have been targeting large corporations. Last week they bombed the Octansoft tower on the other side of the district! All the banks have been on high alert and they've cut our hours in half. Have you been living under a rock?" Jebediah O'Reilly: "Oh, I've heard of them..." *bang* *crash* Blenjamin Blandin: "Oi, U-u-u-unhand me, y-y-you fiend!" Policemen: "You're under arrest for disturbing the peace. Stop struggling, you will only make it harder on yourself..." Blenjamin Blandin: "S-s-stop! I-i-i'm from the future!" Jebediah O'Reilly: *facepalm* TO BE CONTINUED... It's worth noting that the taxi is a slightly modified version of the one found in 60050 Train Station. Thanks for looking! Comments & criticism welcome, as always. Please, excuse my awful attempt at background removal on the first picture. Edited November 2, 2015 by mediumsnowman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted November 1, 2015 (edited) Original post is updated with more pictures and full story. Edited November 2, 2015 by mediumsnowman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EpsilonEta Posted November 2, 2015 Wow, -15 years and 2.5 million lightyears! That's some space/time machine! (Sorry, did it again. I don't have anything against you but your stories must be just on the line of realistic enough that I judge the physics harder than others. That “flash light” should really put it on the other side thou but I started writing before you showed it ) Anyway, interesting story and a nice bank. Wonder if Jebediah will be able to stay away from changing history (more than he is by being there) when he seams to know about those terrorists. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StarHawk3 Posted November 2, 2015 I like the bank building. Is Scooby Doo going to affect the story at all? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted November 2, 2015 I like the bank building. Is Scooby Doo going to affect the story at all? Thanks! Nah, he's just an Easter Egg. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Sal Posted November 2, 2015 Where's the space vehicle? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jody Meyer Posted November 2, 2015 (edited) @Big Sal, I think it would be the futuristic taxi...I would think. I really like this build, I was going to build a bank as well this week good thing I didn't, mind you could have tied it in I guess..the front of the building is built great. Edited November 2, 2015 by Jody Meyer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted November 2, 2015 Where's the space vehicle? The food cart is the land vehicle, and the taxi is the space vehicle. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Sal Posted November 2, 2015 The food cart is the land vehicle, and the taxi is the space vehicle. Oh, ok! I thought the taxi was the land vehicle, and wasn't thinking of a food cart as a vehicle at all . I'll allow it unless Bob overrules me, but your spying tag definitely doesn't count. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted November 2, 2015 Oh, ok! I thought the taxi was the land vehicle, and wasn't thinking of a food cart as a vehicle at all . I'll allow it unless Bob overrules me, but your spying tag definitely doesn't count. Ok, I'll edit out the spying tag. I knew it was a long shot anyways. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goatman461 Posted November 2, 2015 that hot dog cart is awesome. the construction crew is a nice touch and that statue is very cool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted November 5, 2015 The judges awarded you 4 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites