GoH Freebuild: Vampire Slayer

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Previous Chapter: The Kelra --- Next Chapter: Dubbed Captain

(Warning, this chapter is long)

Aeldric tread carefully and silently through the dark labyrinth. The

thought that almost any of your nightmares existed in there lingered

quite long in his mind. He took a gulp at each corner, dreading what

may be beyond. He crept up to his hundredth corner, and peeked to

the hallway. He saw a large figure. A large set of silver armor, with a

blue mist emanating from inside it walked slowly with a huge sword

dragging on the ground.

He stepped on a small twig which snapped, and the armor turned

towards Aeldric with a fury. Aeldric had no other choice but to

assault it. He ran with the fury of a Minotaur. The possessed armor

raised the huge sword with a single arm, which took Aeldric by surprise,

and he nearly backed down, but with the resolve of a ranger, he kept

on his fury. The armor ran back at him. Aeldric was nearly run over, but

he jumped to the wall, and bounced off behind the armor.

The suit turned around instantly, and began a heavy swing towards Aeldric.

But the armor was not fast enough, for Aeldric had knocked the armor's

helmet off with his sword. The helmet dropped to the ground and shattered,

and the spirit possessing the armor fled from the suit.

Now, to get out of the Kelra.

[Later, after exiting the Kelra, and entering Nocturnus, Aeldric enters the large fortress of Axtrous the night lord...]

Aeldric stepped forth, upon the grand rug which led to Axtrous' coffin throne. Two orc guards stood by,

completely ignoring Aeldric. "I call upon the Night lord." Aeldric said, with a strange confidence.

He jumped as the lid to the coffin jerked open as fast as lightning. "What brings you here, Aeldric son of

Kaedric?" Axtrous said, with a dark, impending voice.

He stood up out of his coffin.

"I have come to avenge Aurthal and my family." Aeldric said. "Then let us fight like real men." Axtrous

said. Aeldric threw his sword to the side, and rushed towards the vampire. As soon as Aeldric came

close enough, Axtrous grabbed him by the neck and leg,

and flipped him over himself and into his coffin.

Aeldric then stumbled out of the sarcophagus and began a second rush at Axtrous.

When he reached Axtrous, Aeldric only relieved a powerful punch to the chest,

which sent him flying, and hitting the coffin.

After he hit the coffin, Axtrous slowly approached. A black spear formed in his hand,

and he prepared to sheath it in Aeldric's corpse.

Aeldric quickly grabbed his sword by his side, stood up, and jabbed it up

Axtrous' throat. He choked, as blood began to leak out of his skin pores.

Aeldric shoved the sword further in, and the head came off, stuck to the blade.

He reveled in his victory, and the two orcs fled out the fortress.

Aeldric had left a nice present for Lord Raavage to find.

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Ok guys, sorry about the poor quality of the second build. I really just didn't know what

to put in a large throne room. Plus the freebuild is mainly focused on the Kelra. C & C Welcome!

P.S. I would have put tiles down, if i had had enough.

Edited June 27, 2016 by Windusky

[Lord Vladivus]

I like the Kelra!

[Tezclatipoca]

I like it.

Your story is a good one to follow !

So I don't matter the second build, it is what it is : a Throne Coffin room.

good job

[TitusV]

The first build is really good, the second a bit plain, but still nice

[LittleJohn]

Great work! The first build is very nice, I like the vines

[soccerkid6]

Excellent fig posing throughout, and the wall texture in the first build looks nice

[Bregir]

I think the first build shows that you have taken in the advice you have gotten on earlier builds, which really is what GoH is all about! :)

The Kelra build is really nice, and I particularly like the first photo, looking down the corridor! One thing I would like to see is some texturing of the ground. While the walls are great, the ground is a bit lacking. This is a little harder to accomplish, but it really adds to the build. :)

I like the throne room too, and the posing and sequence of the photos are great. You have put some nice thought into the details in the room, but it does look at little bland in places. Maybe a solution could have been to make it smaller? Alternatively, building one or two of the walls could have been an option to get away from the somewhat "stuff on a plate" look it has.

Overall nice builds, good story and excellent action shots! Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more from you.