Graham Gidman Posted September 9, 2015 (edited) Reyelan fared surprising well during the Kaliphlin Civil War. So well, the government began buying a portion of the food from farmers and millers to sell to surrounding areas. Graham rides out to one of the mills to check in on the process. Edited January 25, 2016 by Graham Gidman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lord Vladivus Posted September 9, 2015 That water is brilliant, despite its simple nature! I like the fields too! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blufiji Posted September 9, 2015 Gorgeous scene, especially the water. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted September 9, 2015 Really cool! I think the water would look even better with some light trans-blue and clear studs mixed in though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Halhi 141 Posted September 9, 2015 This is a great scene, especially the water. However, I feel that in some ways it's perhaps a bit too generic in terms of style. Maybe it's just because I've gotten tired of seeing the standard green landscape with rocks and water, but I'd like to see something a bit more unique, I think, whether technically or stylistically. Still, a great MOC! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Graham Gidman Posted September 9, 2015 (edited) Really cool! I think the water would look even better with some light trans-blue and clear studs mixed in though. That was my original thought, actually, but I didn't have enough trans-light blue to do it properly. Once I get some more, I'll try this technique again. This is a great scene, especially the water. However, I feel that in some ways it's perhaps a bit too generic in terms of style. Maybe it's just because I've gotten tired of seeing the standard green landscape with rocks and water, but I'd like to see something a bit more unique, I think, whether technically or stylistically. Still, a great MOC! Thanks for the input! I personally really like green in Castle landscapes, and I just acquired a lot of it from the Pick-A-Brick wall, so I had to use it in something. I have been wanted to do something a little more technically/stylistically based lately, but haven't gotten around to it. Maybe for the CCC... Edited September 9, 2015 by Graham Gidman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deraven Posted September 10, 2015 That's awesome! The windmill is nicely done, if a little bit too neat/bland, but I really love the landscaping! The path and rocks are nice, the technique for the plowed garden rows is great, and the waves in the water look amazing! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mrcp6d Posted September 10, 2015 Heck yeah! 1x1 plate water that isn't just thrown on the table! I use the same technique for most of my water; I'll echo the comments about both the great shaping of the swells and the need for some trans-light blue and trans-clear pieces. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Graham Gidman Posted September 10, 2015 (edited) Heck yeah! 1x1 plate water that isn't just thrown on the table! I use the same technique for most of my water; I'll echo the comments about both the great shaping of the swells and the need for some trans-light blue and trans-clear pieces. Trust me, I was tempted to go with that method. Yeah, like I said to mediumsnowman, just didn't have enough of them to do it properly. I'll definitely give 'er another go once I have more or if it's on a smaller scale. Thanks for the comment, mrcp6d! Edited September 10, 2015 by Graham Gidman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dubbadgrim Posted September 10, 2015 This has a very tranquil atmosphere, I'd rather live here than in some dry, desert warzone! And I'm a fan of the tidy water style, I think the loose 1x1 style with different colours can contrast too much with landscapes. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dzoni90 Posted September 10, 2015 Great ideas for water and fields Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Covenant84 Posted September 10, 2015 That water I'd be tempted to add a bit of colour variation but perhaps that wouldn't work on a smallish patch like this. The whole build looks great! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiloNelsiano Posted September 10, 2015 A very pleasant scene with very nice landscaping! I'm also a big fan of this water style, I will have to try it myself sometime. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kai NRG Posted September 10, 2015 Really nice technique for the water here! I don't envy you the stacking though. The path and windmill are also really nice, and I like the clothesline - nice addition! If I may offer a critique though - I think that given the low toned colors of the build, taking it on a bright background might have helped a bit. Colored flowers (instead of white) would also probably have livened the scene up. Other than those minor things however, very nice build! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TitusV Posted September 10, 2015 Very cool build (love the water!) but i think the background is too dark Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Exetrius Posted September 10, 2015 The water(side) looks very nice, interesting techniques! The rest of the landscape is nice too, the path is integrated well, the flowers and scattered rock make it look very natural. The mill has a detailed, sturdy wall, a welcome approach with all the sketchy, highly greebled ones that are quite popular. Only one point of criticisme: the wings have about the right proportions, but are not made of wood entirely, sails make the wings go round. Good entry nonetheless Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Petric_G Posted September 11, 2015 Yep that water technique is cool! I have to try it sometimes. The brown areas are thoes new felds? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jacob Nion Posted September 11, 2015 (edited) This is a great scene, especially the water. However, I feel that in some ways it's perhaps a bit too generic in terms of style. Maybe it's just because I've gotten tired of seeing the standard green landscape with rocks and water, but I'd like to see something a bit more unique, I think, whether technically or stylistically. Still, a great MOC! That's Avalonia! Boring green, unpoisonous trees. Nothing against our exciting and dangerous flora in Nocturnus. I like the mill a lot, the round shape is wonderful. But I have to add one point of critique: the top of the mill should be able to turn around 360º to set it in current wind direction. But it's a fantasy world. So if you tell me that in your settlement the wind has a constant direction I have no complaints about it. P.s.: love the acres. Edited September 11, 2015 by Jacob Nion Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BrickOn Posted September 11, 2015 I want to try that water too, it looks so good. I like the use of the flower stalks on the tress too. Lots of little things going on here I like it, especially the pig eating the mushrooms :-) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Regenerate builder Posted September 11, 2015 I love that water. Excellent job overall. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Captain Braunsfeld Posted September 11, 2015 Very fine build - fields, mill, water... everything! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LittleJohn Posted September 12, 2015 Fantastic entry, Graham! The mill itself is superb, and I love the overhanging leaves on the banks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Graham Gidman Posted September 12, 2015 (edited) Thanks for all the kind words and suggestions, I'll keep those in mind next time. Yep that water technique is cool! I have to try it sometimes. The brown areas are those new fields? Yes. Edited September 12, 2015 by Graham Gidman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soccerkid6 Posted September 13, 2015 Wonderful build, Graham. Great windmill, landscaping, water, and trees Plus you included some good details with the clothesline and barrels Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SpacerSteve Posted September 13, 2015 Wow this is wonderful! The way you did the water is awesome. The field built with the log wall bricks is a great idea. This is all around cool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
