Commander Beltar Posted July 25, 2015 (edited) Location: B07 Vollfort Tags: Civil, Spying (Again, please check this one.), Spaceship (Interior), ============================================================================================================================ Begin Log, Chapter 1, Part: 010: “Why here?” “Why now?” ” Beltar thought in his head as he spied on Nu’q to make sure there were no guards even close to this unused, and empty storage room. Nu’q: Such a lovely planet… Would have been lovely to study it before it cooled…If there were Wasps though, I will never set a foot there… Nu’q: Oh, hello there Beltar. Beltar: Why here? Why NOW? Nu’q: This is my only free time for the rest of the week. I’m a busy man you know. Also, this room isn’t scheduled to be used for weeks because of faulty wiring from a relatively new recruit. Nu’q: You see, I designed this ship to be virtually impossible for spies or stowaways to get around without at least triggering some type of alarm…Yet you’ve managed to get into this room. Great job with that. Also- Beltar: THE FILE! Nu’q: Yes, yes, you’ll attract guards like a blackhole-everything if you keep talking that loud. Beltar: If you don’t mind, I don’t want to END UP in a blackhole. Nu’q: Right…your trial. At least you have a couple months. Beltar: THE FILE. Nu’q: Alright, alright. But while you’re here, enjoy the view. Such a lovely little planet from space. But down on it, a dry arid desert. Much like Guinivere, possibly the worst planet here except for its wonderful resources…It reminds me of the early days of exploration in this galaxy. Beltar: And why do I care? At this point I just DON’T CARE ABOUT CERTAIN THINGS. Nu’q: Maybe, if you try to remember past…Paradise… while concentrating, more will come back. Reminiscence is good. Beltar: *sigh* Perhaps. Project Paradise is something I may never forgive Kawashita for even if it did save my life… Nu’q: *quietly* You misguided man… Beltar: Hmm? Nu’q: Nothing. Beltar: Well, this was a clean smooth transaction. Nu’q: Agreed, Kawashita did not suspect a thing when I went looking for this file…for reasons.. (OoC: Q did ‘track’ Beltar’s movements in the early weeks…So Kawashita assumed it was him digging in on Beltar’s personality.) Beltar: Good. Tell me a bit about her before I read it… Nu’q: I didn’t read much and I won’t spoil much, but she had an Outstanding Military Career in the high divisions of Kawashita, but left…for reasons… And that is all I will say. Beltar: Hmm… Nu’q: Oh, two more things: PauL will break. Lies don’t do well on robots. One of our older Hal-thousand bots…Broke…and Paul’s AI is based around them…Also, read that file in a secluded place. It may be infuriating to you. I hope you don’t kill anyone else. Beltar: Hmph. PauL will not break. He’s done what I’ve asked well. And I already saw that tracker you placed in him…And will do…AND I WONT KILL ANYONE ON CAMERA ANYMORE. Nu’q: Quiet down. Good bye. Beltar: Till we meet again. *Beltar Leaves the room really fast* Epilogue: *Mysterious Voice*: Operative Q, are you there? Report. Nu’q: Yes, this is Q, I still have my eye on Asset Issue #42. Beltar will hopefully not crack. *Mysterious Voice*: Good… What of his robot? Nu’q: I do believe he will malfunction within the coming weeks. *Mysterous Voice*: Good….Anything useful in for court? Nu’q: Yes. Especially with my current warrant, we will be able to use many things… *Mysterious Voice*: Good... Keep that eye on him. Nu’q: Roger that Sir. *Mysterious Voice* No need for formalities Q, Madame Kawashita will do just fine. Nu’q: Yes Madame. Operative Q Out. Close Log, Chapter 1, Part 010 ============================================================================================================================ More pictures in the spoiler! (Because I take too many!) No Figs The Parts Separated Without The roof Setup Thanks for reading this installment in Beltar’s story! Hopefully the idea of a Paul 9000 moment got through this time…Robinhood will probably return soon. And perhaps I will reveal the whole convoluted giant overlapping storyline I’m making…(Which will include events before AG started…) And Madame Kawashita is not pleased with Beltar… C and C welcome! ~Beltar Edited July 31, 2015 by Commander Beltar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ferdinando Posted July 25, 2015 Great story! (I couldn't help but notice your character is designated as Asset #42...Hmmm that reminds me of something.) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kai NRG Posted July 25, 2015 Very nice interior Beltar! The addition to your story is quite ominous as well! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Sal Posted July 25, 2015 A perfectly executed and presented build, with a great story as usual! The view of the planet out of the window is so atmospheric! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mike S Posted July 25, 2015 Nice shot with the planet in the background and looking forward to the next installment o Beltar's story! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LittleJohn Posted July 25, 2015 I love the planet in the background! Nice story too Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
David FNJ Posted July 25, 2015 Neat story! Planets in the background never get old ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blackhawk STX Posted July 25, 2015 This could get good... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mediumsnowman Posted July 26, 2015 Nice, clean build! I have to say I expected some sort of mention of Jeb's offer though... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dannylonglegs Posted July 26, 2015 Nice little Moc! The setting is great, but the story is even better! I love watching your character's intrigue advance each week! The plot thickens! Great job! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commander Beltar Posted July 26, 2015 Thanks for the comments everyone! Great story! (I couldn't help but notice your character is designated as Asset #42...Hmmm that reminds me of something.) Thanks! 42... Very nice interior Beltar! The addition to your story is quite ominous as well! Thanks Kai, was supposed to be ominous indeed! Great story! Thanks shmails! A perfectly executed and presented build, with a great story as usual! The view of the planet out of the window is so atmospheric! Thanks! I got inspired from WickNole's build a couple weeks ago for the planet usage in this situation. Nice shot with the planet in the background and looking forward to the next installment o Beltar's story! Thanks Mike! Next week's build will be a very important for my convoluted story... I love the planet in the background! Nice story too Thanks John! The planet was great fun to photograph since it meant that I couldn't really show anything outside of the room/build. Neat story! Planets in the background never get old ;) Agreed! Thanks! This could get good... It wasn't already? Joke aside, thanks! I hope it gets good too... <snip> Nice, clean build! I have to say I expected some sort of mention of Jeb's offer though... Thanks! Well, Beltar wants to hide it, and Q doesn't get to know everythinging...And don't worry, I have a plan for Jeb's offer in the coming weeks... Perhaps I will tell you in advance if you wish to make another crossover! Nice little Moc! The setting is great, but the story is even better! I love watching your character's intrigue advance each week! The plot thickens! Great job! ~Insectoid Aristocrat Thanks! The plot will be so thick it could be a novel by December probably... ~Beltar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mccoyed Posted July 26, 2015 Great build. I like how you shoot these scenes. Means even a simple build has drama and presence. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commander Turtle Posted July 26, 2015 This is such a simple build but so rich with story. I like how you're playing Andromeda's Gates, it's great seeing people approaching it from different angles Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted July 29, 2015 The judges awarded you 4 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
