GoH Freebuild: The Tomb of Dar Askelohn

[halixon]

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The room was dark, besides the small hole in which Aeldric jumped down.

A beam of sunlight shown down into the room, revealing many rows of sarcophagi.

The one thing that stood out to him and Voraal was the large coffin. Behind it was a

small statue of an elderly man. A plaque rested in front of the casket, and said:

Here lies the founder of the

Avantari, Dar Askelohn

"Who's that?" Voraal asked Aeldric patiently. Aeldric rested his chin on his fist.

"Dar Askelohn was an ancient scholar of the mythic elf tribes near Vanhorn.

They were only myth, for they were rarely seen, but Dar said he knew them well."

Aeldric finished. "He was a close friend to my grandfather, and mysteriously disappeared one

day." he said. "Maybe we can try to find one of these tribes?" Voraal asked. "Well,

perhaps. But only on our next patrol. It's getting late." Aeldric said, looking up through the hole

in the flooring, and at the rising moon.

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Alright, so this build is what mainly kicks off what will be Aeldric and Voraal's main story.

Next build will depict them out, searching for one of these mythical elf tribes.

Until then, let me know what you guys think! If you have any ideas, please share them!

More Pics Below!

Now, i won't be going for large builds until i can get my hands on a decent

sized bricklink order, also, don't have the largest LEGO collection, so,

excuse me if that's what you expect. ;)

Edit: I know the build isn't large, but here, i mainly wanted to try out a coffin technique.

Edited September 18, 2015 by Windusky

[Legocity2713]

Although not large, it is still a great build. Love the figs too. :thumbup:

[Lord Vladivus]

The tomb is nice. I'd have perhaps tiled the ground, or otherwise textured it- it looks a little plain as it is.

[Full Plate]

That's a pretty nice tomb :)

[Exetrius]

Great tomb! I hope you will implement it in a bigger build

[Ecclesiastes]

Nice one, I like the small ornaments on it. Like said before what could improve it would me more tiles. Keep it up

[Balbo]

The way you made the tomb is very nice. I like the statue on the top

[LittleJohn]

Cool tomb, I like the curved slopes

[halixon]

Thanks all for your constructive comments.

[MassEditor]

Sweet tomb! Nice design and SNoT technique! Interesting story as well.

I would echo the feedback on adding some texture to the floor. You should get yourself another piece of white poster board to place behind the build, that way you'll end up with a nice solid white background in all your pics.

Look forward to more from you!

[Umbra-Manis]

Nice tomb!

[ShastaSerpentine]

I really like how it looks aerodynamic.