Boxerlego Posted May 16, 2015 (edited) Transmission 1 AD3851 Maian 16 Location: Jen's Star After a long trip in space I finally made it to Jen's Star. It was a rough landing along side of the mountains. Octan corp has Let me test out their new Model T Utility Bot. Its specialty is in construction but right now its has been good at uprooting plants and moving rocks. I've been searching along side this rocky mountain ridge for signs of water flow. Took me some time to find but I finally come across a mountain side minerals deposit and according to what I was taught only water can do that. Scanners are picking up loads of minerals in that deposit but it looks too dangerous for me to excavate intensively, Plus Night is falling upon me and I need to get some rest after the long hike today but lucky the Utility Bot never sleep. The Bot has also reported about picking up the sound of running water but that is way to far at the moment to journey to at this time of hour. I'm going to take shelter in the cave up ahead. End of Transmission Edit: Image was remade and new one was posted with more visibility Edited May 19, 2015 by Boxerlego Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Commander Beltar Posted May 16, 2015 Looks cool! Perhaps next time you take shots, I'd suggest adding a bit of light to it, it is kind of hard to see the 'Model T Utility Bot' because of the shadows. The BURPs really helped fill up a lot of space and I like the story as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lord Vladivus Posted May 17, 2015 Looks nice. Good story! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goatman461 Posted May 17, 2015 It is hard to get a good look at the bot but there is some nice part usage from what I can see Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Boxerlego Posted May 17, 2015 (edited) Thanks everyone for the comments, about the lighting in the picture, I made it sort of dark to represent the time of day. I will continue on with the story later today. Here is a LDD picture of the Model T Utility Bot. Edited May 17, 2015 by Boxerlego Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AC_ Posted May 17, 2015 Although it's a shame you can't see the Bot particularly well, the darkness of the shot makes me think of a slightly grainy quality image being transmitted back to headquarters. A nice little scene. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Boxerlego Posted May 18, 2015 Transmission 2 AD3851 Maian 17 Location: Jen's Star Caves According to my reports from the Utility bot, water is somewhere in this cave. I have send out a request for supplies for water extraction. The utility bot has already cleared an area out for the acquisition of supplies near the cave entrance. Shipping Reports said the the supplies will come soon and the bot gives me estimate completion for date for the water extraction sometime next week. Right now I'm going to explore this cave out in further detail then the maps the bot has made me and plot some of this underground water supply my self. During this time I'm going to figure out a efficient Water system so we can begin extracting water soon as possible out this cave. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mike S Posted May 18, 2015 Although it's a shame you can't see the Bot particularly well, the darkness of the shot makes me think of a slightly grainy quality image being transmitted back to headquarters. A nice little scene. I agree. The bot has a very classic vibe to it. Nice work! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Boxerlego Posted May 18, 2015 Although it's a shame you can't see the Bot particularly well, the darkness of the shot makes me think of a slightly grainy quality image being transmitted back to headquarters. A nice little scene. I will get some better picture of the bot sometime near cant really say when at the moment. I agree. The bot has a very classic vibe to it. Nice work! Thanks Mike S for the comment. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Boxerlego Posted May 19, 2015 I added to the scene I built and made the picture brighter. If anything is a problem with the picture let it be known. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pombe Posted May 19, 2015 Thanks for brightening the picture. Your build has a great narrative. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tariq j Posted May 19, 2015 Nice work and build, I like your concept and story as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lady K Posted May 19, 2015 Thanks for improving the light on the picture. I like your Model T Utility Bot! Great story as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Boxerlego Posted May 20, 2015 Thanks for brightening the picture. Your build has a great narrative. Thanks Pombe. It was very impromptu build at first for me. I started to come up with a narrative in the middle of the build which help me shape the scene even more. Nice work and build, I like your concept and story as well. Thanks Tariq j. Along with the build the Story was impromptu as well. Thanks for improving the light on the picture. I like your Model T Utility Bot! Great story as well. Thanks Lady K, I'm glad you like my Model T Utility Bot, I will try to come up with more story's for my other builds Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Big Sal Posted May 21, 2015 Nice little scene! Looks like a pleasant place to explore Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Andromedas Gates Posted May 22, 2015 The judges awarded you 2 points. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites