ItsaBRICKS Posted July 26, 2014 Posted July 26, 2014 Hey guys, This is my first time posting here. I'd like to offer up my custom MOC Shatterpoint starfighter for constructive criticism. Sorry my camera quality isn't great, only had my iPod camera working. Overview shot Side shot Rear View Top View Shot of the side wing/missile detail Thanks for looking! Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Quote
MKJoshA Posted July 27, 2014 Posted July 27, 2014 Wow! There is some great detailing on this ship! I love the SW cannons in the back acting as exhaust nozzles, NPU! I think you've succeeded in keeping the colors consistent, but you might not want to have your color scheme be so patchworked. Having larger swaths of Dark Red or White instead of the checkboard look might help improve your build. But, overall this is a very nice MOC! Quote
ItsaBRICKS Posted July 27, 2014 Author Posted July 27, 2014 Wow! There is some great detailing on this ship! I love the SW cannons in the back acting as exhaust nozzles, NPU! I think you've succeeded in keeping the colors consistent, but you might not want to have your color scheme be so patchworked. Having larger swaths of Dark Red or White instead of the checkboard look might help improve your build. But, overall this is a very nice MOC! Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I could have used a much more uniform color scheme, but I was kind of going for that patchwork, beaten look. Quote
cgarison Posted July 29, 2014 Posted July 29, 2014 I like the beefy style of your ship and the patch work style does indeed give it that well used look. Good work and I look forward to seeing more. Quote
ItsaBRICKS Posted July 29, 2014 Author Posted July 29, 2014 I like the beefy style of your ship and the patch work style does indeed give it that well used look. Good work and I look forward to seeing more. Thanks! I've always thought a lot of ships TLG makes are kind of small, so I tried to give this one a beefier feel. Quote
Blufiji Posted August 5, 2014 Posted August 5, 2014 I like the ship but agree with first comment..large patches of white and red instead of checkerboard effect. Quote
TenorPenny Posted August 5, 2014 Posted August 5, 2014 The patchwork look is like space camo..! Very nicely done. Quote
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