First real film - Thoughts welcome

[Brick_Fan_Tan]

Hi all

Have added a bit more detail to this one. I think the timing is a bit out on some of the effects, and I messed up on one of the walks, but its progression I reckon.

[emilstorm]

Ok, so it's the 13th century Matrix :) I think your technique is still good, I wouldn't worry too much about a mistake or two, that's the charm of stop motion :) I think it is really good overall, also considering you you have two 'actors' moving simultaneously, which can be tricky. I would still work on the focus, light and background to make it spectacular :)