Legofan225 Posted November 15, 2013 Posted November 15, 2013 (edited) Okay hello everyone ! here it goes recently l began build one Hero Factory MOC but one problem l got is that l can't figurout some more ideas to make it more complete firts before l started building l gotted some basic ideas from the Mocs that l watched on the internet and from a movie "Iron Man' that l was watching yesterday. The Moc l made it a litil bit based on this character that l seen Next um the ideas l gotted were the shape,form and the structure and the look ofcourse it does not look the same just um well okay so now the progress well when l started building it everything went okay first but later when l wanted to complete well the back went wrong somehow but the overall build is stable ofcourse but u here are the images: 1)http://postimg.org/image/4tk8cm2t5/ 2)http://postimg.org/image/l5ua2ch4p/ 3)http://postimg.org/image/4w43zg6gp/ 4)http://postimg.org/image/qwkgg2p4p/ 5)http://postimg.org/image/k7iidst6h/ 6)http://postimg.org/image/kyb8jkvjt/ 7)http://postimg.org/image/4btoai2m1/ 8)http://postimg.org/image/6hnz5062h/ 9)http://postimg.org/image/umoompqd5/ 10)http://postimg.org/image/4sevwxqd5/ Okay so as you can see here is my MOC and if you can please tell me some advice becauce l'm running out of ideas how to complete it and also please tell does it look good too becauce this time l spent days of working on it and if you have some free time please leave some feedback thank you Edited November 15, 2013 by Legofan225 Quote
dooberfloober Posted November 15, 2013 Posted November 15, 2013 maybe less appendages and more armor plates? Quote
DraikNova Posted November 15, 2013 Posted November 15, 2013 He means the wing flaps. That blue really clashes by the way, although your colorschemes are getting better. I'd recommend trying to make the arms slightly thicker. Quote
Jetrax99 Posted November 16, 2013 Posted November 16, 2013 less appendages ? You have too many bones showing and not enough armor plating. Same problem w/ your earlier scorpion moc. Cover it up. Quote
Legofan225 Posted November 16, 2013 Author Posted November 16, 2013 You have too many bones showing and not enough armor plating. Same problem w/ your earlier scorpion moc. Cover it up. Alright then thank's Jetrax99 He means the wing flaps. That blue really clashes by the way, although your colorschemes are getting better. I'd recommend trying to make the arms slightly thicker. As you can see l'm improving and make the thicker okay l all ready found some usefull parts from my inventory Quote
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