Admiral Ron Posted October 23, 2013 Posted October 23, 2013 Hello everybody! It's been a long time, but I have finally gotten my Lego back and wanted to share what I have made. A lone Templar Knight is riding across the Kingdom when he happens upon the Western Watchtower. His horse is in need of water and he could use a bed as well, as he has been riding hard for many days. In the name of the King, who goes there!? Any suggestions you have would be greatly appreciated! Glad to be back! Quote
kermit Posted October 23, 2013 Posted October 23, 2013 Your tower is great, but the windows are a bit too blocky. May you can use some arch pieces to make it look more smoother in detail. Quote
Mahtion Posted October 24, 2013 Posted October 24, 2013 I like the attention to little details like the young stable boy feeding the templar's horse and the layers of wooden planks to suggest ramparts. The foundation of the tower looks hollow and weakly supported. Maybe create some cavelike structure to mimic a cellar? Another way could be to add some support pillars so the underside doesn't appear so empty. Great job on the story, I want to see more! My imagination runs wild regarding the travels of the Templar. Is he on his way to the Holy Land or has he returned and is trying to find lodging on his way back from a prolonged war campaign? I see Gollum! Quote
Admiral Ron Posted October 24, 2013 Author Posted October 24, 2013 Thanks for the suggestions and feedback everyone! I've had some time after work so I did a little updating, enjoy! As for the backstory, I haven't come up with one yet But I plan on making some more MOCs regarding the travels of this Templar, so stay tuned! Quote
mpoh98 Posted October 24, 2013 Posted October 24, 2013 Welcome back! Nice little moc, I like the shed/stable for the horses! Quote
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