AoM: Barracks Phase 1

[hench]

Two soldiers, training under leaves of ancient trees.

Phase 1:

Edited November 5, 2013 by hench

[kabel]

Hey there Hench,

don't get me wrong when I say this, but we really wanted everybody to do one build one by one and not you to rush into the AoM. That said, I think you should take you first build, add some more structure to the ground (bushes, grass, rocks etc.) repost this once you think you have improved considerably and wait some more input. Once you get the approval, you can move on and do a second phase moc in which you build something more than your second picture from the first one.

Anyway, there are already some good elements in you first pic. I like the tree and the minifig action. But make the whole thing a bit more detailed. You'll see that if you take in the feedback given by the whole community you will develop as a builder in no time at all

[soccerkid6]

Neat fig combos and I like your little trees I think both scenes could use some more detailing on the ground, cobblestones, plants, snow, or whatever fits in the scene

[mpoh98]

Nice fig combos, and little tree. I agree with label, take your time, and try and add more detail to your moc. The more the merrier! :D

[kermit]

This seems to be lacking in some vegetation or some additional structures to show that it is part of a scene.