Nept Posted June 7, 2013 Posted June 7, 2013 This is one of my newer MOC's. This was quite a simple build and I was more of looking to create a good sense of invasion and hostility. The story line behind this is that the mandalorians have got involved with the Republic thus meaning a task-force is sent out to takeover and shutdown their base. All constructive criticism is appreciated! Enjoy! So like I said-All constructive criticism is appreciated as I'd very much like to use it to help improve my next MOC! Quote
miles teg Posted June 7, 2013 Posted June 7, 2013 I like it. Whos the Jedi leading the clones ? And is that Pre Visla rushing through the doorway ? Would like to see it expanded with more clone / mandalor squads fighting outside the building or on different levels too Sorry for double post....and maybe a few details in the walls/control panels for the doors etc. They look a little bland at the moment Quote
Nept Posted June 7, 2013 Author Posted June 7, 2013 I like it. Whos the Jedi leading the clones ? And is that Pre Visla rushing through the doorway ? Would like to see it expanded with more clone / mandalor squads fighting outside the building or on different levels too Sorry for double post....and maybe a few details in the walls/control panels for the doors etc. They look a little bland at the moment Thanks for the feedback! It's something I've been working on but I haven't been able to give my full. The Jedi is simply one I made up-His name being General Credion. And yes, that is Pre Vizsla. Quote
jmagaletta Posted June 7, 2013 Posted June 7, 2013 I like it, only gripe on my part is Pre Viszla only had one darksaber. Quote
Nept Posted June 7, 2013 Author Posted June 7, 2013 I like it, only gripe on my part is Pre Viszla only had one darksaber. Yep. I just thought it would look better with two. Next time I'll try to stick to the show more! Quote
jmagaletta Posted June 7, 2013 Posted June 7, 2013 Yep. I just thought it would look better with two. Next time I'll try to stick to the show more! If that is the case go with this part in black, first thing I did when I got my pre viszla. http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItemPic.asp?P=30173 Quote
Xcod119 Posted June 10, 2013 Posted June 10, 2013 I like the way his lightsabers are being held backwards, as if in a rage fuelled charge Quote
LEGO Train 12 Volts Posted June 10, 2013 Posted June 10, 2013 Lovely black saber ...like in the cartoon scene! Quote
Nept Posted June 12, 2013 Author Posted June 12, 2013 I like the way his lightsabers are being held backwards, as if in a rage fuelled charge That was exactly what I was aiming for! Custom blasters on fox(?) look good! That is my custom Captain Logi. But I can see why you thought otherwise! Lovely black saber ...like in the cartoon scene! Thanks! This was a alternate path for the cartoon. Quote
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