Nightstalker Posted May 14, 2013 Posted May 14, 2013 // Location: Volen Mountains, Nothl // Time: 4:21 A.M. // Units: Vektan Ranger & Rapid Recon Force The target has been spotted about five miles south our position. With any luck we'll catch him asleep. These bastards took out our shield on Synseso and now we're getting some payback. A storm is brewing in these mountains; hopefully, it should cover our advance. I'm picking up strange static; better listen in. <Journal Ends> ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Overall MOC View of the Terrain Back View Back from a short break Day Five of the ongoing conflict. Hopefully this turned out decently. Anyways C&C is always welcome and appreciated!!! Quote
Grazingcattle Posted May 14, 2013 Posted May 14, 2013 I am so glad you came back from your short stint off. Last week I eagerly looked forward to your next portrait and this week is no different. Today's felt a bit bare but, that may have been an artistic choice. The light dusting of snow makes the scene feel more alive. My only real "complaint" is the frozen stream(?). It didn't really do it for me. It felt a bit flat and lifeless. It does give the model a sense of story, but in your write up its clear that that isn't the case. The frozen stream trickle has no real significance in the story arc. I look forward to tomorrows! Quote
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