My very first Moc - Hidden Temple (micro scale)... with Indiana Sellec

[LegoIndy]

Hi guys! I´m gonna present you my very first moc... I titled it Hidden Temple... with Indiana Selleck! I think that is very caotic... but... it is a jungle! :) Without more words, let's see the pictures! :)

Shot I

Shot II

Shot III

... and... here is Tom Selleck as Indiana Jones! :)

Shot IV

Thanks to all and I´m waiting for your comments! :)

[Ritz Brick]

I understand what you're trying to achieve here, but it just ends up looking a bit messy. Try using mostly shades of green with just a few splashes grey or brown.

[Daedalus]

I agree with Ritz; more green, less everything else. Unless you're looking for an overgrown temple look, more grey with the overgrowth added on after. The same is true for the second moc with the skeleton; a little more uniform color would be a good start. Like you said, a little too chaotic.

On the plus side, the character idea is great. I like that you've put him in two separate vigs. Both ideas are great, they just need some polishing. All that said, you've got to start somewhere, and it's not bad for your first try. Keep it up!