MOC: WW2 Forced landing

[tongue60]

My new moc WW2: Forced Landing

A German pilot suffered an engine failure over its territory and landed in a field, a farmer comes to aid to the pilot ...

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Edited October 23, 2011 by tongue60

[tongue60]

No comment ?

[Ralph_S]

Getting few or no comments is not all that unusual, I'm afraid.

Anyway, I have a few. I like how you've made the path that the pilot has made through the cornfield, but find it a bit odd that the aircraft hasn't made any tracks. I also would like to suggest that you make the field a bit bigger. It seems odd that there's another green are behind it and that, somehow, miraculously, the pilot managed to end up stopping his plane in the far corner of a tiny little field. A few more ideas. Have you considered trying to build the plane with its canopy open? Perhaps you could have the pilot's helmet lying on top of the wing too. That would make it a lot clearer that the pilot has landed this thing in the field. There's also nothing that tells me that this is German plane, except perhaps the yellow nose which I guess means that the plane is supposed to be a Bf109. There are some really nice bits in the landscape, but overall the story that it's telling isn't at all clear and some of the details are a bit off.

Cheers,

Ralph

[lightningtiger]

True 'Ralph' comments are sometimes few and far between.....'tongue60'....not bad vig you have here. Though I agree with 'Ralph_S'....detail on the plane - Bf109 I agree with too....but markings and weapons ?

I do like the flatten wheat field left in the wake of the pilot's footsteps.

Brick On Fly On 'tongue60' !