MOC Mr Tape is looking for a gift

[The0]

Hey! This is my last MOC, it's the sequel of this one and the prequel of that one.

It shows how Mr Tape the robot found a present for his friend's birthday.

(sorry for the blurry pic, i'll make better ones later )

Hope you like it!

EDIT : New Pics!

Comments and criticisms are welcome!

Edited July 16, 2011 by The0

[Tervlon]

Great build, the Toy Shop is very well detailed. I really like the revealed brick and the rain gutter!

[The0]

Thanks for your comment! You have a lot of great MOCs!

I've added new pic in first post.

[Brickdoctor]

Unlike a lot of post-apoc MOCs I see that are just a bunch of exposed studs and bullet holes, this building has an authentic, well thought-out run-down post-apocalyptic look to it. Great work. And the shattered glass is beautifully done.

[Si-MOCs]

I like this build a lot.

You've captured the feeling of a dilapidated building extremely well.

Lots of great details, like the storm drain, exposed brick, roof, the sagging gutters/lamp posts etc etc etc!

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Edit: Hehe I just looked at the rest of the story - fun stuff!

Edited July 17, 2011 by SI-mocs

[Yatkuu]

Excellent build, I love the atmosphere. You have some great details in there, the hole in the roof being my favorite.

The only thing I'm not too fond of is the store sign "TOYS" - I'm not sure what is bothering me - maybe the fact that is not at the same level as the rest of the wall or maybe it's the light blue that does not work... or the "Y" that looks more like a "4".

I don't know how to make a better looking "Y" but with regards to the color of the letters maybe a mix of the red/blue from the fool's hat would work better?

Just a question, how do you come up with your stories?!