Navy Trooper Fenson Posted May 29, 2011 Posted May 29, 2011 (edited) *tictac* *tic tac* *tic tac* *clunking of boots* *door opening sound* *drinking* Shadow ARF: *sigh* Shadow ARF: Noooooo! Shadow ARF: First they fire me from my job and now they closed my bank account! *bangs on the machine* Shadow Stormtrooper: Looks like you need some help. Shadow ARF: What happened? Shadow Trooper: What? Shadow ARF: What does the Shadow Proclamation need me for? Shadow Trooper: You were the very best, like no one ever was. Shadow ARF: I know, but why do you still need me? Shadow Trooper: The underground says that The Prototype is returning. Shadow ARF: You mean the renegade? Shadow Trooper: He is gathering followers. Other defectors of our organisation. This psychopath wants to watch the world burn. Shadow ARF: I´ve got enough of this. Shadow Trooper: We NEED you! Shadow ARF: You know that I´ve got a child. The marriage didn´t survive but he still needs me, too. Shadow Trooper: We can´t stop him without you. If you turn away from us, the city will be doomed! Shadow ARF: So be it. The Prototype: Our troop grows steadily, good... goooooood... NEWCOMEEER! Report what you´ve heard about Shadow ARF when you were leaving the proclamation! ARF Trooper IV: He visited the boss but he cares too much for his family as that he would join the fight again. Prototype: Well, well... If he doesn´t want to join our party because of his affection, we should exploit this chance for a prey. Prototype: GO NOOOOOOOOW! ARF Troopers: YES, SIR! Market-woman: That makes five bucks. Shadow ARF: Okay, I am ready now Ni-... Shadow ARF: Nicholas? My baby. My baby. Shadow: My baby is off. Have you seen him anywhere? Market-woman: For heaven's sake no! Shadow ARF: I am back. Shadow ARF: Or did you think I was gone forever? ARF Trooper II: We dropped the baby off where you said. ARF Trooper III: What the fu- *BOOOOOM* *firing shots* *BOOOOOM* Shadow ARF: KILL THEM! *DOUBLE HEADSHOT* *nodding* Shadow ARF: It´s time! Prototype: Do you really think this wou- *DYNAMIC LEAVING!* Shadow Trooper: The computers say he will be waiting for you at the Kirby Plaza. We will help- Shadow ARF: No. Shadow ARF: This is something I have to do alone. Prototype: Oh yes! YES! *clapping* Prototype: Good boy *clapping* Prototype: Fabulous that you found the way to us! Prototype: A little too late it seems, some of the visitors already left. Prototype: But don´t worry, they weren´t even on the guestlist to begin with. Prototype: TeeheeheehuaghhawhawHAWHAWHAW! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Weeeyooouuu... Prototype: PROTOTYPEEEAH TROOOOPEEEERRRR!!! *dragging* *dragging* *dragging* *dragging* *clonk* Prototype: Come on you can do this better! Shadow ARF: I am getting a clue. *drop* Shadow ARF: It´s huuuuuuge! Prototype: Your puny granades can´t help you now! *HIT* *TURN* Prototype: WHAT?! *drag* Prototype: This bucket form isn´t as comfortable as I thought... Prototype: Oh no, the pin! Icebear: Grrrrrr... Prototype: Why did I even have to bring an icebear into this fight? My weakness for achromatic animals foiled me! Prototype: Well, lick it! *BOOOOOOOM* *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM* *BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM* *flickering* *Duuuuuuuh* *clonk* *open* *flickering* *flickering* *flickering* *flickering* *flickering* *flickering* *credits music Bon Jovis You Give Love A Bad Name Edited May 29, 2011 by Navy Trooper Fenson Quote
Darth CJ Posted May 29, 2011 Posted May 29, 2011 Lovely! it has everything laughts , a fight and white boba fett ! Quote
Mr Man Posted May 29, 2011 Posted May 29, 2011 This is really good Navy Trooper Fenson, very funny, especialy the Indiana Jones fridge at the end. Quote
Ceroknight Posted May 29, 2011 Posted May 29, 2011 Very Nice! Hope there will be more like this! Quote
Vindicare Posted May 29, 2011 Posted May 29, 2011 Nice job, I like what I saw of your layout. Maybe not, but does the ARF trooper live at the Fire Brigade station? It looks like he's coming out the door of it. Quote
The Legonater Posted May 30, 2011 Posted May 30, 2011 Very nice strip! Funny, exciting, and pretty good all around. A final battle at Kirby plaza sounds familiar though- but I can't put a finger on it. Quote
Ki-Adi-Mundi Posted May 30, 2011 Posted May 30, 2011 How gorgeous! Congratulations on your fine work. What an admirable effort in building this. An entertaining adventure story and pretty funny, too! Keep it up! Quote
green dewback Posted May 31, 2011 Posted May 31, 2011 Fantastic action sequence. Bulletproof fridge as seen in the movies . Quote
Navy Trooper Fenson Posted June 2, 2011 Author Posted June 2, 2011 Thanks for the feedback. Nice to see that the work is so well recieved. This is really good Navy Trooper Fenson, very funny, especialy the Indiana Jones fridge at the end. This sequence was actually more influenced by the climax of Double Team, an interesting Vin Diesel movie. I recommend watching the movie or at least the Nostalgia Critics review. Nice job, I like what I saw of your layout. Maybe not, but does the ARF trooper live at the Fire Brigade station? It looks like he's coming out the door of it. Yes, the scenes out and inside of his home are the Fire Brigade modular house but are supposed to be a completely different building than a fire brigade station. A final battle at Kirby plaza sounds familiar though- but I can't put a finger on it. This was a reference to the first season finale of Heroes. Quote
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