[BrickFilm] To kill a Mocking Bird WIP

[Brick Smiley Productions]

This is my frist brickfilm that I am doing for an english project. I need alot of advice on it from brickfilmers and random people that would provide good advice to make it better. Here it is:

Feedback of any kind is welcome, I wish to get a good grade!

Thank you to all your help!

[fallentomato]

This is my frist brickfilm that I am doing for an english project. I need alot of advice on it from brickfilmers and random people that would provide good advice to make it better. Here it is:

Feedback of any kind is welcome, I wish to get a good grade!

Thank you to all your help!

That's great work for your first brickfilm! I think you do a good job of moving the characters as they speak. I would suggest using more light (I use desk lamps) the picture is coming out very dark. I think it would also be helpful if you had a few different people record the voices. Right now it is hard to tell the characters apart because they all sound the same. You should ask your family or friends to help you out - that way each character will have their own voice. Good luck!

[Brick Smiley Productions]

That's great work for your first brickfilm! I think you do a good job of moving the characters as they speak. I would suggest using more light (I use desk lamps) the picture is coming out very dark. I think it would also be helpful if you had a few different people record the voices. Right now it is hard to tell the characters apart because they all sound the same. You should ask your family or friends to help you out - that way each character will have their own voice. Good luck!

Thanks alot for the advice. It was a night scene so I thought that I should have made it darker but I will keep lighting in mind for later. As for voice I would try something better but right now I have a due date of Thursday so I am in a bit of a rush although I do try to slow myself down while I film. Oh and by the way, can people give me an estimate of how long on average it takes you to shoot. Beccuase right now it takes me about an hour to shoot 10-15 seconds and at this rate I won't finish by Thursday.

Thanks guys the tips are very appriecative!