MOC:Flower shop

[Antonio]

This is my flower shop,its my most detailed modular building.

First here is the front-

Here ís the back-

Here is a little sign, i hope that it isnt too hard for reaidng :D

A "bird" eye picture-

A "snail"eye picture-

And the full folder when moderated-

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=453536

Comments,sugestions and criticisms are welcome .

PS:Sorry for oversized pictures

[Geertos13]

This is G-O-O-D.

The Combination with White and blue, and also some Dark Blue, is very appealing to the eye, and gives it a nice color shade. 3-floor-Buildings are always tricky to make. And I think you succeeded pretty much. I'm saying pretty much, because they are some things I don't like in the building. That's why this building isn't G-R-E-A-T, or P-E-R-F-E-C-T.

The Front looks nice, but with the dark lightning it looks kinda depressing. I tried to make it look sunny, and then it looks much better ( this is just about the photography, not about the MOC itself ) The flowers in front of the shop are a nice touch, but I must say you might got a little "over the top" with these wild green plants growing on the front. It also surprised that those Thorny Dark Green Plants were on both sides of the windows on the second floor ; Doesn't really attract people to go doing their shopping in there right ?

I liked however, the building technic for the balcony on the third floor. I would never have though of using them in that way. The hanging laterns on the front are also a great addition to the building. The side and the back of the building are quite bad... Yellow and dark grey pieces ? Is this due to the lack of pieces ? I don't know but It sure doesn't look good. Your attempt of writting "LEGO" was a good Idea but failed a bit at the letter G.

So to make it short :

This building has some great designs and could fit in properly in a LEGO City. The greenery on the front, the thorny plants at the sides, and the multi-colour pieces are defenatly a take-down to this building. This is why the building is G-O-O-D instead of G-R-E-A-T. If you fix that, The building will be much better. So this MOC, is a great addition to the City, but with some Architectical lacks...

PS : The Picture Size is quite disturbing indeed. Try to follow Mister Phes' Excelent Tutorial

[XimenaPaulina]

Nice work on this modular flower shop Antonio, but your pics are waaay too oversized and exceeds the photo image size limit here in EB by a mile. Pls. resize it to 800x600 max. before a mod notices this one. but still, good job on this one.