Act I: How I Died

[Daniel Williams]

Here's a simple vig/scene of a short story I created a few days ago...

Me and James were walking down the streets of a French village when we came across a weird sight. We saw a German sucking the blood out of an American soldier. We looked at each other as if sicken by this, we saw many things during the war, but nothing like this.

He got up, turned and we saw blood dripping from him as he slowly looked up, he was badly deformed in a way. He smiled at us and than lunged forward. We jumped out of the way. And before I knew it he came back and started to suck the blood out of me.

I felt my life drain as the German held me tight in his attempts to drink my blood.

I collapsed as I heard gun fire and felt it stop. The last thing I saw was my friend dragging me away. "Hang in their Xander, I'm here for you."

I closed my eyes and slowly felt myself change. My body was changing and somehow this was how I would eventually die, but somehow I was just a shadow of who I was. I turned into a blood drinker, a vampire, a beast of the night forever forced to stay in shadows for fear of bursting into flames at the touch of light.

{Note: The vig takes place on one dark gray plate with one backwall used twice} Any comments or suggestions

I'm not going to make or should I say post Acts 2 to 10 sadly, due to the fact that I don't want to get your guys hopes up and second it sounds a little like Twilight which is the worst piece of literature in the history of human culture and of the English language. But anyway any comments or suggestions would help me with more vigs to come, thanks for reading.

[lightningtiger]

Interesting story 'Daniel Williams' and you are right about one thing.......

' Twilight which is the worst piece of literature in the history of human culture '

I'm a conformist! !