Daniel Williams Posted April 21, 2010 Posted April 21, 2010 Mr. Smith walked to work, but stopped and started down an alley way. He looked straight ahead and there was the mystery box. He didn't know why he chose to go this way, cause it wasn't his usual route to his work site. "Doctor," said a whisper from behind. "I'm sorry," said Mr. Smith as he turned to the other person. "Aren't you the Doctor?" "I'm sorry, no I'm not a doctor. There's a hos--" "I know what you are Doctor... you are older then time itself." "I'm sorry I don't know..." "You may lie to yourself, but look in your pocket." "I don't need this, good day." Mr. Smith turned and started to walk away. "Do you really think you can turn your back on this? It's just the start of your journey. You are the Doctor, the last of the timelords." "I'm sorry, you must be..." "Mistaken? Surely the visions are prove enough of your place in history and space." "I'm sorry, good day." Mr. Smith started to walk away. He didn't know that at that moment, the Dalek race was mobilizing to change their fate and to finally kill the Doctor on the nearby moon. To be continued... Any suggestions or comments or questions? Quote
Big Cam Posted April 22, 2010 Posted April 22, 2010 The story is interesting but I think one thread would be better for all of the storyline. I look forward to the next one. Quote
WhiteFang Posted April 22, 2010 Posted April 22, 2010 Daniel Williams, Please post your relevant updates with regards to your LEGO Stories MOCs in one thread. You don't have to post one chapter or some scenes for each new topic. It's not necessary. Thanks for your understanding. WhiteFang Quote
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