Z-95 Headhunter

[Yuppley]

This is what I just posted for th SW contest, I mainly refurbished it, because it is like 2 years old, but still the newest I've made.

Anyways, I would like you all to review it, or just give me tips to make it better (It isn't supposed to be in scale, or have all the details, either)

Also sorry for the blurry pics :(

http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=161529

[Yuppley]

C'mon, one of you must have something to say :(

[Sir Dillon]

Well, I have next to nothing experiance with building space MOCs, so this may be really lame advice, but i think it's too blocky.

The shape looks like a good start, but I think the front part is too small, and doesn't look that good with the square-ness of the cockpit. I think if you would make it come in to the front with hinge pieces like the X-wing it might look better.

Like i said, it's a good start, but has much room for improvment. :smile:

[Deinonychus]

C'mon, one of you must have something to say :(

You asked for it!

It doesn't really scream "Headhunter" to me. Firstly it needs 4 engines, and a rounded cockpit piece like the N-1 has. The aft end needs a more rounded appearence, sort of a hunchback look. The transition from body to nose is too squared, a couple angled bricks in there would work better to blend the lines. The lasers can be swapped to the top of the wing and the wings themselves need widening. The nose is spot-on however...it keeps that slim pointed shape the X-wing doesn't have. So, by keeping in the same basic direction you were heading in, and just adding a few more parts and perhaps some more bulk, it could become a pretty decent Z-95 eventually.

Now, if you were going for a sort of prototype stepping-stone craft Incom may have made while developing the T-65 from the Z-95, well, you've pretty much got that nailed

[Kikuichimonji]

If you really want comment...

It's too blocky. Way too blocky. The part where the cockpit end and the "front" begins is very ugly because you didn't use any slopes. If you don't have any slopes, at least change it so there's only a single-stud gap unlike the 2-stud gap that's there right now.

Why did you used inverted slopes on the wings? That's very ugly too, you should absolutely change those to normal slopes. And it does indeed need 4 engines...

It doesn't scream "Z-95 Headhunter" to me either.

Sorry if that sounded harsh, but whenever I post a MOC I enjoy getting criticism more then applause, because criticism allows for a further development of your skills. Keep building!