cheesey skrall Posted February 16, 2010 Posted February 16, 2010 (edited) Ok, this is a preview of a thing I'm writing. If it's popular enough I will continue. If not, I'll give it up. Anyway, the thing: HERO FACTORY:ALPHA TEAM The figure was slumped in the corner, it's helmet and body leaking battery fluid and coolant. Warning lights flashed on the Walls of the rubble- filled burning hell pit. The figure was Mark Surge, a rookie and brave fighter. His hero pod lay waste beside him, where he had failed to land outside the building. Surge twitched as his backup power generator kicked in. Surge hauled himself out of the rubble to see the state of the room. The sudden shift of weight put pressure on the ground, making him fall through the floor, onto the lower level. This room was in a worse state as the other. But this room was different. The Walls were lined with tubes filled with a green bubbling fluid which had leaked out onto the ground. Surge avoided the fluid with caution, only to trip on an iron bar. Picking himself back up, he became face to face with a growling green beast... - - - 'Ok, squad, Surge has crashed into the test chambers.' brawled Preston Stormer, the bravest and most experienced leader of all of the teams. 'it's our job to retrieve him. Blaze, you and Bulk take the eastern enterance. Me, Breez and Stringer will take the Western' - - - The green creature pinned down Surge, drooling a thick orange liquid onto his sparking battle damage. The thing had giant blades longer than Surge himself, and had 2 on each arm. A menacing shattered horn stuck out of it's knarled green forehead. Surge began to feel hazy. The creature had infected Surge with it's scythe-like weapons. As the creature reared for an attack, a deathining blast shook the room, blowing the creature to flaming green chunks. Preston stormer, Natalie breez and Jimi Stringer stood at the doorway of the room. Stormer held out a helping hand, which Surge took. 'Surge, your a mess. Look at you! Your lucky to be alive. The Corroder could have killed you on the spot. Did it infect you?' before Surge could answer the world around him went dark... - - - PS people may not like it, but it's the best I can do. Coments are welcome. Thanks. C Skrall Edited February 16, 2010 by cheesey skrall Quote
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