MOC First time : motorcycle

[angel1802]

Hi,

here's my first moc motorcycle. Ok it's not detailed, but i wanted to have your opinion, critics... whatever, i need to know if things could have been better (pretty sure it could) or so...

Thanks for checking and comment

Thank you again for reading

[lightningtiger]

Very nice design 'Angel1802' !

The rear fender and fuel tank could be considered spot on for a real bike.

Great work and I'm a conformist! !

[ImLost]

That's a beautiful motorcycle. The design is excellent. I think it could use a bit more vibrant colors but again, great work!

[prateek]

Nice! I see you used my help I really like the overall design of it

[dr_spock]

Very nice design. I think it would work better if you'd coordinate the colors.

[Tom Bricks]

I like everything but the handlebars, The stud above the light looks odd in my opinion.

[ACCURATEin]

Awesome! Reminds me of my friends white and black Ducati Monster.

[Captain Green Hair]

Nice job for a first, looks indeed like a streetfighter like the Ducati monster!

[peterab]

Hi,

here's my first moc motorcycle. Ok it's not detailed, but i wanted to have your opinion, critics... whatever, i need to know if things could have been better (pretty sure it could) or so...

Thanks for checking and comment

Hi angel1802,

Thats a very nice motorbike, it looks a bit like a classic unfaired bike to me. I agree about the stud above the headlight, and I also think the tap as a kickstand looks a bit odd, but I'm far from experienced at bike Mocs and can't suggest anything better. To give it a bit more of a classic feel this would look good with the white and maybe some other parts replaced with dark red or green, but that may not be what your aiming for.

[Big Cam]

Not bad, I like the bike stand you so cleverly made.

[angel1802]

Thanks everyone for the comments. Little questions : i can't find the translation for : Stud, rear-fender and tap. Kind of lost with these words

An other thing, about the color i agree, i need to find a better "harmonisation". I have to look for better pieces (if i have). The headlight disturb me too, i tried with the same piece not x2 but x1, it looked weird as if it was missing something in front of the fuel tank. I wanted to do better for the motor but wasn't sure what and how to use something else. Same for the exhaust. Bref, i ended up with this one even though it wasn't what i was aiming for

Edited January 29, 2010 by angel1802

[Tri95]

sehr nett,

[peterab]

Thanks everyone for the comments. Little questions : i can't find the translation for : Stud, rear-fender and tap. Kind of lost with these words

An other thing, about the color i agree, i need to find a better "harmonisation". I have to look for better pieces (if i have). The headlight disturb me too, i tried with the same piece not x2 but x1, it looked weird as if it was missing something in front of the fuel tank. I wanted to do better for the motor but wasn't sure what and how to use something else. Same for the exhaust. Bref, i ended up with this one even though it wasn't what i was aiming for

Stud - the little round things on top of LEGO bricks that hold them together

Rear Fender - the back bumper bar

Tap - The things that turn the water on and off in a kitchen, the piece you used for your stand is often called a tap piece because its often used as a tap.