Lego_Warlord_8 Posted October 27, 2009 Posted October 27, 2009 <a href=" title="Oi! Ye Spilled Ye Pint! by Sir Regonold, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2492/4050648961_2b7aac18de.jpg" width="500" height="375" alt="Oi! Ye Spilled Ye Pint!" /></a> <a href=" title="Oi! Ye Spilled Ye Pint! by Sir Regonold, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2446/4051391642_9ee2ca11e5.jpg" width="500" height="375" alt="Oi! Ye Spilled Ye Pint!" /></a> Gee, I just realized that I haven't really posted anything lately! But never fear, I'm working on a project, as always. ;) Happy drinking! ~SR~
MetroiD Posted October 27, 2009 Posted October 27, 2009 (edited) Hi there Warlord, you've used A-href and img src standard HTML tags to display the pics of your MOC, but they don't work here... you should instead try using the and tags or the buttons that have been provided especially for that. As to the MOC itself - to start off, it isn't too peaceful - but that's what alcohol would do to you I must say I really do enjoy the scene. However, I feel that adding a background story would help a lot here, since I must admit I'm at a bit of a loss as to what precisely is happening... Did someone spill someone else's pint - because that's usually what would lead to a fight? Or was it all that rat behind the counter's fault (and I don't mean the poor bartender :) )? Anyway, as to the details - I really like the cask, I do feel though that you should replace the 2x2 plate and tile at the end of the barrel with brown pieces in order to match the overall colour and make it look more genuine. The shelves behind the bartender also look nice , I wonder how they'd look if you'd add a wall behind them - I have the feeling that would round off the MOC while presenting you with a nice chance to add more details. As to the decoration on top - it looks catchy, but once again I have absolutely no idea what it should represent... Overall, even though this is by far not the most peace-loving entry in this contest, a bar brawl is a definite must-have in any self-respecting pirate's day :) I'm really glad that we also have one such entry for the Contest! My primary suggestion to you here would be to add a bit of a background story - thing should slowly start coming into place then! Edited October 27, 2009 by TheOtters
Lego_Warlord_8 Posted October 27, 2009 Author Posted October 27, 2009 (edited) Oh no, can a moderator please delete this topic? I accidentally posted two of the same thing. Very sorry. ~SR~ Edited October 27, 2009 by Lego_Warlord_8
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