Star Wars Fan Fiction

[Commander Flash]

As you can see from Sith Supremacy, I am a fan of alternate storylines. Here in this topic, you can create a story that defies George Lucas' storyline. Yoda becomes a sith, Luke is Vader's father, or Mace Windu kills the Emporer: Anything can happen!

My Fanfic:

Revan: Hero, Jedi, Sith...Mandalore?

Revan was born on Mandalore sixteen years before the start of the Mandalorian wars. She was a Taung, and was quite tall. She was the daughter of Mandalore the Ultimate. At the age of six, the jedi found her and took her away from her father. On Dantooine, she met Bastila, who was also six. After eight long years of training, she became the best swordsman in the order. She left her best friend Bastila to leave to find her father. She was entered back into the Mandalorian clans and crafted her own suit.

Two years later, Mandalore the Ultimate and the Mandalorians attacked outer rim worlds. With Revan's brilliance, the Mandalorians faced very few losses. Once amassing many small worlds and countless supplies, they attacked the Middle Worlds. On Naboo, Malak, a Jedi, encountered Mandalore. He was able to slay the great leader. In her anger, Revan killed Malak, avenging her father's death and being crowned Mandalore the Revanchist. She led her Mandalorian forces to Coruscant. She led a army up to the Jedi Temple.

"Revan!" Yelled Bastila, now 22. "Why have you turned on the Jedi!"

"Join me or be killed!"

"I thought you loved me! You said that on Dantooine. You were the purest Jedi I ever met, not a Sith!" Cried Bastila.

"I..I do. Will you join me and become my ally?" Said Revan.

Bastila let her passion get the best of her and she used her Battle Meditation for Revan. Revan killed the council and all the jedi. The council was empty by the end of the day.

"Kex, Tell Cassus to block the sun. Cassus did, and not a bit of sun reached Coruscant. The residents and senators gave into the Mandalorians, but because they wanted the glory of battle, they killed the senators. The republic was ended. After twenty years of terraforming the planet, it resembled Mandalore, their homeworld. The Taungs lived on and Revan and her wife Bastila lived on the planet and died a peaceful death. The mandalorians were in control of the galaxy for two millenia, until a rebellion attacked Mandalore II. The planet was re-Metropolisized in 1500 years.

Now its your turn to write a good story!

[cole]

This is an alternate ending to Force unleashed, not a story, but just a little idea.

In the final battle aboard the death star, Starkiller strikes down Vadar, taking his place at the Emporers side. He takes Vadars armour, as it will provide him with even more power. Starkiller kills the Emporer during the battle of Endor and claims to be Lukes father, hoping he will save him.

[Commander Flash]

Pretty good. Ideas are fine, you don't need to do a long story