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What so there's a bay guy trying to kill us and we just walk out the door? :wacko: and leave him in the holocon room which were trying to protect. :wacko:

Sorry. I was trying to move the story forward.

Edited by strider406
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“Legis the blast door are closing hurry” yelled Strider but it was too late for the blast door were closed. “There must be a way out” supposed Legis and at that same moment the lights flicked then died leaving Legis and Strider in the dark. Thinking fast Strider turns on own light saber casting a pale green light around them. Looking around Legis spotted what must be a shadow. Creeping silently he moved nearer to the shadow then raising his twin blasters leap right in front of the shadow with his blasted pointed at the things heat. “Well done” said the thing that voice could only be that of the bounty hunter Spyder.

Ok commander flash we need you to roll .

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Spyder vs Legis?

Spyder rolled a...5

Legis rolled a...3

Spyder Won.

Legis shot, but missed. As a faint pitter patter of footsteps start, they end abruptly, under the noise of blaster fire. The general drops, and Strider goes to see if he is ok, but Spyder escapes again.

Edited by Commander Flash
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Out of nothing Strider saw a red glow...

It came closer, and Stider saw who it was...

It was Darth Ezelon.

There was a big deul.

Strider threw Ezelon in a corner with the force.

Strider escaped quickly.

Ezelon saw Strider escaping and he knew he couldn't catch him so he went back to the corpse of Legis.

Ezelon found something usefull, very usefull...

It was a battleplan to attack the sith base on tatooine.

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After Darth Ezelon left a group of clones quickly pick up Legis body and brought it onboard a cruisers and headed towards what must be Legis’s home planet. Were a man in a black cape was waiting.

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Edit: sorry, that this isn't in the game time

As darth Ezelon was walking to his ship with a holocron he took, he feelt something that was coming closer and closer.

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he turned around and saw 4 jedi knights.

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they said: Darth Ezelon you are under arrest in the name of the Republic!

Darth Ezelon: I don't think so

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Darth Ezelon summond his pupil.

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And the fight started...

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And so Darth Ezelon defeated his enemy's

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Darth Ezelon: Nice done my apprentice.

and darth Ezelon left Bespin...

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... to (for now) an unkown location.

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Commander Flash can chapter 3 be created?

Edited by repubilcFORCES
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I hope it will be tatooine, because then we can have an episode in sandmans lair or Ezelons palace

than it can be like the star wars the clone wars episode The lair of general grievous!

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I hope it will be tatooine, because then we can have an episode in sandmans lair or Ezelons palace

than it can be like the star wars the clone wars episode The lair of general grievous!

:laugh: Good idea. A lair filled with booby traps. That won't get unrealistic or out of control! :tongue:

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YE, that wouldn't be unrealistic...

lava pits

monsters

creepy hallways with mines

creepy rooms where you will drown if you don't get out

and other stuff.

Exactly. You could make up anything at any time, so let's keep it under control, if it happens that is.

What's your choice, Spyder?

Posted (edited)

Yes, I am back. :tongue: I think Tatooine sounds good, or maybe Naboo? If it's Tatooine, then it should be somewhere in or around Mos Eisly, as that is what most of us all know pretty well. Naboo could be either Sith trying to take over a Jedi Palace, (deja vue) or maybe the Jedi stumble upon ancient Sith ruins that Ezelon has fled to. Naboo sounds better to me, but I want to know what you guys are thinking.

EDIT: Or maybe even Naboo swamps! Hey, at least we can massacre some Gungans. :tongue:

Edited by Spyder
Posted (edited)

Tatooine or korriban, PLEASE pick Tatooine or korriban.

Edit: or Manaan...

Edit 2: you sounded like a gungan racist there, and it's only fun to kill jar jar :tongue:

Edit 3: forgot the smillie

Edited by repubilcFORCES
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Spyder, it's completely your decision. You pick whatever you want. :classic:

Well then, I believe that I will pick Tatooine. Maybe we can do Naboo later. Tatooine just seems easier for everybody here to make MOCs of, and tan is a pretty common color nowadays. The setting will be outside of the city, Mos Eisly. Ezelon lands near a mining camp, and befriends Tuskens. They raid the camp, for several months, hoping to gain enough supplies to start a new army. Spyder has fled Bespin after the Sith's attack failed for the most part. Both the Republic, Spyder, and Cazador are drawn to this raiding party because there have been rumors of a Tusken wielding some sort of hot glowing stick of light. The Tuskens fear and bow down to him. They follow his every order, and if they don't, he uses the air to somehow crush their neck. The mining camp is starting to fail, and the men have begun to take arms against the Tuskens. Both the republic and the two bounty hunters grow of suspicion that Ezelon has returned to Tatooine to gain control over his home planet. The story will be held in the camp for now. Now then, let chapter 3 begin. Flash, if you want to add my backstory to the first post of chapter three, you may. I'll start to make my Tatooine stage for my MOCs, so let the story continue.

Posted
That story is great, it's sounds that Ezelon (me) is a supreme overlord on tatooine and i like that :devil:

I knew you would! :laugh: So is everyone OK with the story line?

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