Spyder Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) I arrive on Endor in a Sith fighter, waiting for Darth Skintasee's command. In the mean time, I set up little fortifications around the encampment where we are holding the rest of the ewoks. I then set the rest of the sith troopers at strategic points around the camp, hoping to fend of the enemy, and earn some more credits. What can I say, I'm a bounty hunter. I set out in a scouting party to try and find Legis' gunship, leaving Skintasee to protect the camp. EDIT: Oh Darn! You beat me Mraz 'Skintas! With HK-47 outside the hut, I sit in a branch, ready to snipe any enemies that might come. I have brought a couple Sith troopers with me, but I have the feeling that I did not bring enough. Edited July 4, 2009 by Spyder
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Your other story was perfectly fine too, but whatever. I like that you've included some kind of self doubt as well. Right then. The Republic consisting of Galeer, Vrook, Shaela, 2 Mandalorian troops and 2 young Ewoks return to the Jewel and contact Hunter IV (Galeer's Republic cruiser). The Commander of the 722nd Elites informs the Jedi that a transmission has been recieved from Legis' fleet saying they had landed on the moon and were preparing to free the village. Republic-friendly smuggler Trav Crodile has also landed on the moon to give his services to the mission. However, Legis left the 722nd Legion to go on a scouting mission. They lost contact with him earlier and give the Jedi his last known coordinates. The Jedi and Mandos say they'll check it out on their way. Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
Spyder Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 I like that you've included some kind of self doubt too. Well what do you want me to do, think I'm almighty and that I can't be defeated like all those other villains out there? No! That would be boring. Of course, I'm a bounty hunter, and I have some experience in this field, so when I have a feeling that we are not well prepared, then I think I'm right. I mean, I want us to win, because I want credits! Oh well, we know that the good guys always win. It's just too much fun being a bad guy though.
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 Well what do you want me to do, think I'm almighty and that I can't be defeated like all those other villains out there? No! That would be boring. Of course, I'm a bounty hunter, and I have some experience in this field, so when I have a feeling that we are not well prepared, then I think I'm right. I mean, I want us to win, because I want credits! Oh well, we know that the good guys always win. It's just too much fun being a bad guy though. No. I like the way you've done it. The game is called Sith Supremacy, so you do have some sort of edge.
Mraz Skintas Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 I send three of the Sith Trooper Commanders toward a landing pad that would I thought would hold Galeers shuttle when he gets planet side. They all set charges on the pad, hoping that they will destroy the shuttle when it lands.
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) I send three of the Sith Trooper Commanders toward a landing pad that would I thought would hold Galeers shuttle when he gets planet side. They all set charges on the pad, hoping that they will destroy the shuttle when it lands. But, of course, the cruiser anticipates this, with the moon being under Sith control. Even though they're not sure why there's a landing pad on a moon previously inhabited only be Ewoks, they don't land on it. Instead they land in the forest along with Legis' fleet. Meanwhile, the Jedi arrive at the coordinates they were given and find bits of debris scattered through the forest. The Ewoks climb the surrounding trees and see a great deal of smoke coming from the valley nearby. The make their way towards it and find a crashed Republic gunship at the bottom of a cliff. The remains are still on fire, as is the nearby forest. Looking at the debris through the Mandalorian's sniper scope, they see no signs of survivors. Either Legis is dead, or he's making his way down the river that runs through the valley. The cliffs are unclimbable and the forest to the north is still ablaze. The Jedi decide to follow the cliff edge south along the river to see if they can see any signs of the General. btw. I think it'd be easier to play the game if each player is only in control of one of their characters per chapter. I think most of us are okay, at the moment, but republicFORCES will need to choose between Trav and his Sith. clone killer needs to as well. Also, my MOCs haven't got much of a response. Does that mean they're good and your not telling me, or they're bad and I should stop. Seeing as no one else is making any, I take its the second option. EDIT: That's it for today. No more posting until 3:00pm GMT tomorrow. Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
Commander Flash Posted July 4, 2009 Author Posted July 4, 2009 Your Mocs are good. They describe the scene very well
Dutch Posted July 5, 2009 Posted July 5, 2009 Wait I’m on a republic cruiser in a med bay ADHO15 not in a valley but you can change it. Maybe there are some clone’s that survived the crash that I did not know and you are holding them captive some thing like that.
ADHO15 Posted July 5, 2009 Posted July 5, 2009 (edited) Your Mocs are good. They describe the scene very well Thanks, Flash. I'll carry on, in that case. Seeing as my gunship's already in pieces from making the Jewel, I might as well do a 'crashed gunship' scene. Wait I’m on a republic cruiser in a med bay ADHO15 not in a valley but you can change it. Maybe there are some clone’s that survived the crash that I did not know and you are holding them captive some thing like that. I know, but to avoid all that double storyline confusion, I said we'd continue from the camp again and ignore everything since. I'm not saying that what you three wrote was bad, just that it didn't fit with each other's stories. This is the way it went this time. Edited July 5, 2009 by ADHO15
ADHO15 Posted July 5, 2009 Posted July 5, 2009 (edited) Alright then. It's been three hours and nobody else has continued the story, so I'll carry it on for a bit. About an hour ahead of the Jedi and Mandalorians, General Legis and his two surviving clones of the 722nd Legion encountered a small speeder lodged in the lower branches coming out of the rock. It had lost its roof and was balancing on its side above the sharp rocks below. Although it looked extremely unsteady and dangerous, the General ordered one of his troops to climb up and test the transmissions system. He clambered up the rock face and started to fiddle with the buttons, but due to his extra weight, the weak branch began to split. Legis called his trooper down, but he said he couldn't until he'd contacted someone. The branch snapped and the trooper plummeted to the ground, followed by the speeder. His body hit the ground suddenly and was then crushed by the vehicle. Legis dropped his weapons and ran to his aide, only to find his lifeless corpse lying on the dirt. Some pics: Some people may know where I got my inspiration if I said 'Boone'. Edited July 7, 2009 by ADHO15
Dutch Posted July 5, 2009 Posted July 5, 2009 “Poor commander viper he was such a brave clone” whispered legis “sir look” looking to were the clone was pointing to a squad of sith troopers were rapidly approaching. Thinking the worst legis seizes his twin blasters and begins firing. Hearing the screams of the dyeing and the explosion of combat Legis who had lost his only surviving clone and he the general was near to dyeing as well but as night appeared he spotted what look like a glow in the now dark sky. Could it be thought legis as the glow got closer he could see that it was a republic gunship lead by his friend trav.
RepublicForces Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) btw. I think it'd be easier to play the game if each player is only in control of one of their characters per chapter. I think most of us are okay, at the moment, but republicFORCES will need to choose between Trav and his Sith. clone killer needs to as well. than i will go for ezelon Edited July 6, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (sorry i know not in game time)legis heard something... it was a speeder... legis saw who was on the speeder, it was... Trav! trav went to legis and got of his speeder and he said: where are your clones? legis: all dead... edit: than i will go for ezelon What?! Trav has already been written into the story. You can't suddenly change now. Ezelon hasn't done anything yet, so can easily be taken from this chapter. You might as well save bad guys like Ezelon and Sandman (both Tuskens) for a Tatooine chapter, for example. Trav is already included now, so you'll have to play him.
RepublicForces Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) i deleted it, better?!? Ezelon is inculed aswell (he is also on endor) maybe trav will be killed by a jedi i don't know Edited July 6, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) Don't get angry with me. There was no need to post a story like that when the same thing had just been written by clone killer. Ezelon is inculed aswell (he is also on endor) maybe trav will be killed by a jedi i don't know Not really. All you've said is something like 'Ezelon recieved a transmission and made his way to Endor'. You didn't post when Spyder and Mraz 'Skintas said what they were doing in the village and you haven't posted anything about him at all since. Trav is part of the story now. Ezelon will have to wait until next chapter along with our other characters that aren't here like Cazador and Sandman. Why would Trav be killed by a Jedi, he's on the Republic's side. I don't think main characters can be killed by NPCs anyway, just other main characters. Edited July 6, 2009 by ADHO15
RepublicForces Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 and btw: Trav shooted his flamethrower to the fast moving objectsomething jumped of and opened a lightsaber... a red lightsaber... Trav was like , he tryed to kill the person but that didn't help the person jumped into a tree and trav puted the tree on fire... edit:It was Darth Ezelon!! ezelon couldn't get any closer to trav and trav used this oppertunatie to get away, quick.. he used ezelon's speeder to escape. ezelon is been used here aswell... (page 5
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 and btw:ezelon is been used here aswell... (page 5 But that was deleted after you and Flash started writing alternate story lines. We went back past that and re-wrote the story differently. I wrote that and clone killer pointed it out!
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) Hello all. Today I made another two little MOCs: one depicting Darth Skintasee and Spyder at the Ewok Village and the other depicting clone killer's recent story concerning General Legis. An overview. A Sith trooper brings two rebellious Ewoks before Darth Skintasee. He's not happy. Spyder watches from his hiding spot in the trees, waiting for the Republic to show up. And the other which follows on from my previous MOC: Legis looked down at the clone's body, feeling guilt in the pit of his stomach for what he commanded him to do. The other trooper called to his commander as he spotted a pair of Sith patrol bikers following the valley. He began shooting at them, and hit the second in the chest. The leader, however, continued straight towards him and lept of his bike, leaving it to plow straight into the Republic soldier. Legis dived out the way as it crushed him into the speeder behind. The Sith trooper was more highly-trained than any the General had seen before as he took out his cortosis Sith sword and charged towards him. Legis fired at him with his twin blaster pistols, but the agile soldier ducked and dived out the way, deflecting the bolts in all directions. After a minute of intense combat, the Sith had the General on the ground, his blade at his neck. As he was about to strike, a blaster bolt struck the back of his helmet causing him to fall to the ground. Legis looked up into the dark sky to see a gunship lower towards the ground. Shaela jumped out first with her sniper rifle in her hands. She ran over to Legis and helped him up. The Jedi, Trav and a few troopers got out also to see if the General was okay. He said he had suffered no injuries and that they should get moving down the valley towards the Ewok village. Galeer told him that they should wait until morning before setting off as the powers of the Sith are heightened in the dark. That was basically a recap of what clone killer had said. And the MOC: Edited July 6, 2009 by ADHO15
Commander Flash Posted July 6, 2009 Author Posted July 6, 2009 Those are good MOCs. The effects are cool, especially blaster effects
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) Thank you, Flash. Smaller pieces of blu-tac wouldn't hold the bolts up. Seeing as three people have looked, but haven't carried it on, I'll take it to a place where it can become a game... The next morning, the Republic approached the Ewok village. During this time, the Ewoks still lived in huts on the ground, but would later move up to the trees for better protection. Darth Skintasee was inside the chief's hut at the time and sensed the Jedi coming near. He told his Sith guards to be on full alert. Bounty hunter Spyder prepared himself in the trees. The Republic party, now consisting of Galeer; Vrook; Legis; Shaela; 2 Mandalorian troopers; Trav and two clone troopers; approached the camp carefully. The Jedi used mind tricks like Force projection to distract the Sith guards with images in the forest. As the troopers gave chase to the illusions the group moved closer. Sensing them approachin Darth Skintasee left the hut and called them out. Galeer moved out of the bushes first, followed by Vrook and the rest. As they moved further into the clearing, the Sith lord began to laugh at the Republic's small force. He skillfully used Force corrupt to get into the minds of the soldiers and order them to raise their weapons at the leaders. They surrounded them. Skintasee ordered them to kneel down with their hands in the air and drop their weapons. As a clone trooper bent down to pick up Vrook's saber, the Jedi Master whispered a mind trick to him. The trooper quickly aimed his weapon at the Sith and was about to shoot when a blaster bolt came from the trees and killed him. The five of them knelt there as hostages to the Sith. Skintasee asked Galeer to join his side, but Galeer refused. He asked again, but the Ewok did the same. Filled with anger and rage, the Sith raised his saber.... Your move Mraz! Edited July 6, 2009 by ADHO15
Spyder Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 As Spyder waits for Skintasee to make his move, he trains his scope on Vrook, ready to fire. Skintasee could hold off Galeer, or so Spyder hoped. Spyder called the Sith troopers back to them with his comm system. With the Sith troopers ready to attack the clones, it is now up to 'Mraz. (I think all you have to do is say that you want to attack, and then Flash will roll a die, and tell you if your attack succeeded.)
Commander Flash Posted July 6, 2009 Author Posted July 6, 2009 Thats how it works. Who am I rolling for?
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 (edited) Thats how it works. Who am I rolling for? We need to wait and see if Mraz wants to attack first. btw. Can Vrook be killed in the game, or does he have to be killed by Darth Traya like in the 'real' story? Edited July 6, 2009 by ADHO15
Commander Flash Posted July 6, 2009 Author Posted July 6, 2009 NPCs can be killed , without a roll. It would be good if there was a good, epic fight before they die. Remember, this is on a whole different timeline than KOTOR now.
ADHO15 Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 NPCs can be killed , without a roll. It would be good if there was a good, epic fight before they die.Remember, this is on a whole different timeline than KOTOR now. Right. That's what I was thinking, but I thought I'd best check seeing as he's an actual character.
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