RepublicForces Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) First JewelPilot:1 Passengers:11 Ezelon's ship : the darkness pilot:1 passengers:2 trav's ship: the razor pilot:1 passengers:2 Edited July 4, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Are we ready to start yet? Should we wait for Spyder and republicFORCES? Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Ok. When's that, 10? 3 mins, if they're coming on time. clone killer never confirmed, so he probably won't be here. Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
Commander Flash Posted July 4, 2009 Author Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) We'll start at 10. Until more come, no killing anyone yet (except NPCs like soldiers) After the two soldiers was killed, they walked further through the forest, and a Dark Jedi appeared."Hello, Galeer" Said the Dark Jedi. "Who are you?" Said Galeer. "Karvanas, Ewok Slayer." Said the Dark Jedi. Galeer rushes to the enemy and fights him. The Dark Jedi was killed by Galeer. "It will be ok Galeer" Said Vrook. Galeer got over it, and they continued towards Legis. They then met some Ewoks. Translated, they said "Help! There are unwelcome visitors. Can you save us. Galeer responded "We have come to stop them" The Ewok showed the group the Sith camp, but to be safe, they looked from atop the village. "Hand me my rifle" Said Shaela to one of her Mandalorians. She aimed and shot the two guards. They are in for a big mission. "Shouldn't we help the General?" Said a trooper. "We came to stop the sith-The general is capable, we shall meet him soon, but you can go help him" Said Shaela, as they entered the camp and the troops left to help Legis. Edited July 4, 2009 by Commander Flash
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Another MOC? Shaela called her troops back and told them that they would find the General after clearing the camp. The camp was not very big or developed; merely another outpost with a couple of tents and a camp fire. Its inhabitants tried their best to defend it, but were no match for the Republic knights. While Galeer took down the pathetic troops by use of the Force, Vrook easily took care of the young, poorly-tranined Sith apprentice in charge. The Mandos watched in awe as the Jedi so easily and effectively cleared the camp. The little Ewoks they had encountered were shocked as they had never seen this kind of 'magic' used before. Chained up nearby and eating from a tree was a native Blurrg, presumably used by the Sith on short-range scouting missions around the area. Once the threat was diminished, the Jedi comforted the creature and set it free. The Ewoks were scared to return to their village as they had seen the hostiles come and take it. They decided to stay with the Jedi as they made their way back to the Jewel. Pics: Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
RepublicForces Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) trav crodile got to his ship and flew to endor to search Galeer, Shaela and Vrook he flew above the surface and found smoke Edited July 4, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
Commander Flash Posted July 4, 2009 Author Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) They saw a ship land, and it was Trav Crodile! He jumped out of his ship and greeted us. "I saw smoke!" Yelled Trav. "Where?" The group questioned. "Near Legis' army" Trav said. They ran back to the Jewel and Shaela and the Mandalorians fixed it. Then they rode their ships to Legis' beacon. They landed and then Edited July 4, 2009 by Commander Flash
RepublicForces Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) and at last trav could land and get to the smoke. he found some foodprints and he followed them. But then, a sith trooper attacked trav! trav got shot in his shoulder, but he roasted the sith trooper and walked further and further... He still didn't find his allie's, but he saw something in the distance... somthing really fast... Edited July 4, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
Commander Flash Posted July 4, 2009 Author Posted July 4, 2009 They followed the footprints and saw Legis, bady hurt. "Secret Weapon...Sith...only I survived" They brought him to the republic cruiser and a Medical droid healed him. "So what was this weapon" Asked Shaela...
RepublicForces Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Trav shooted his flamethrower to the fast moving object something jumped of and opened a lightsaber... a red lightsaber... Trav was like , he tryed to kill the person but that didn't help the person jumped into a tree and trav puted the tree on fire... edit:It was Darth Ezelon!! ezelon couldn't get any closer to trav and trav used this oppertunatie to get away, quick.. he used ezelon's speeder to escape. Edited July 4, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 Now you're both running alternate story lines! You both need to sort this out. I'm not trying to fix this! Also, this story isn't going to go very far without the enemy playing. We can keep killing anonymous Sith troopers and Dark Jedi, but if Spyder and Mraz 'Skintas don't join in soon, this is going to be pointless!
Commander Flash Posted July 4, 2009 Author Posted July 4, 2009 I was trying to go along with ADHO15's storyline, and it might help to have some named enemies. If not, this will have to be made into a story rather than a game.
RepublicForces Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 Now you're both running alternate story lines! You both need to sort this out. I'm not trying to fix this! trav is on a other location so he can't be with those other guys
Commander Flash Posted July 4, 2009 Author Posted July 4, 2009 Do you think we should wait for them, or just make this into a web comic?
Dutch Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 But legis did not reply instead he collapse on the floor. More then a day went by but still legis did not talk. By now Shaela was getting more anxious to hear what had happened to legis.
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) trav is on a other location so he can't be with those other guys He met up with them first, so Flash changed his story to fit yours. You then changed it again, and then you both carried on with your own, so now nothing makes sense! Also, you don't have to be attacked by a random Dark Jedi in every passage. Put more detail and description into everything and you'll soon have a nice extract. "They fixed the ship", "he land and followed some footprints", "a Dark Jedi appeared and attacked them"; these things don't need to be put in. If you kept the story realistic and painted a clear picture as to what's going on, the story will be so much clearer between players. Make some MOCs and you can realise from that where to go next or what's happening at the moment! But legis did not reply instead he collapse on the floor. More then a day went by but still legis did not talk. By now Shaela was getting more anxious to hear what had happened to legis. Shall we stop adding replies until we've sorted what's going on? You could just answer me when I asked you what times you want to play in, and where you 722nd Legion are? (even though we've carried on past that now). If we set times and then people don't bother to turn up without saying anything, we're not going to get anywhere! If we want to keep playing Spyder and Mraz 'Skintas need to turn up and contribute. You three already on can stay on and read what other people have said before continuing your own stories. Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Ezelon meeted his allie's not trav... Well you never mentioned him since you said he was going to go to Endor (except in that edit I see you've added). EDIT: Hooray! They're here at last! Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
RepublicForces Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Ok, lets forget this ( the disscusion) Edited July 4, 2009 by repubilcFORCES
Spyder Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 I'm ready, but I don't really understand what's happening, it's a little confusing with alternate story lines going on. I have some bad news. I will be at camp the 13th through 18th. If any of you want to take over my character, (or I can just die) please do so. Other than camp, i should be home all day, so let the story continue.
ADHO15 Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 (edited) Ok, lets forget this We could try and save it, if everyone gets there act together. You shouldn't just give up. I'm ready, but I don't really understand what's happening, it's a little confusing with alternate story lines going on. I have some bad news. I will be at camp the 13th through 18th. If any of you want to take over my character, (or I can just die) please do so. Other than camp, i should be home all day, so let the story continue. By the way it's started, I doubt the game will last until then. While everyone is here, shall we just get on with it? We shall wipe the last mess from the slate and continue on from after my MOC. The camp has been cleared and the Republic party is heading back to the Jewel. Darth Skintasee and HK-47 are at the Ewok village, awaiting Darth Ezelon and Spyder. We have yet to hear from Trav Crodile. I think Galeer's group of 722nd Elites are aboard his Republic Cruiser near Endor and Legis arrived with his fleet but was shot down when out in his gunship. Let's go. If you see someone typing, don't you start, or we'll end up with multiple story lines. If we have some character interaction, this can turn into a game. What ever happened to "Emperor claduis rome" ? He never made a character, so he's out. Edited July 4, 2009 by ADHO15
Mraz Skintas Posted July 4, 2009 Posted July 4, 2009 When Ezelon and Spyder arrive, many Ewoks have already been killed, because they refuse to give out the position of their Jedi Master. Skintasee sits in Galeer's hut, with HK-47 outside, eagerly awaiting the return of the Ewok and his soldiers.
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