teleri Posted April 27, 2009 Posted April 27, 2009 ok so this is just a test for my web-comic... it is going to be a frog/sci fi/ comedy web-comic any way here it is... (unfortunately i havnt put any jokes in... it was very late wen i made it and i was just testing the software...) let me know what you think XD heres the link incase the pics dont work... http://www.flickr.com/photos/29064622@N05/ speak soon Teleri Quote
Asuka Posted April 27, 2009 Posted April 27, 2009 Hey, that looks pretty nice and interesting... well done! Quote
teleri Posted April 27, 2009 Author Posted April 27, 2009 thanks! it will get funnier... but i'm glade you like it XD speak soon teleri xD Quote
captian flint lock Posted April 27, 2009 Posted April 27, 2009 THIS IS AWESOME!!! FROGS UNDERGROUND OMG!!!!!!! i like it keep up the good work flint lock Quote
jifel Posted April 28, 2009 Posted April 28, 2009 THIS IS AWESOME!!! FROGS UNDERGROUND OMG!!!!!!!i like it keep up the good work flint lock Actually, I believe it is not underground. Anyway, the strip looks great so far! Easy to read! jifel Quote
Joebot Posted April 28, 2009 Posted April 28, 2009 Looks like a promising start! Two minor suggestions: 1) Spell check! 2) In the caption boxes, some of the words are broken across multiple lines. Like in the second panel, "remains" and "history." Good luck! I'm curious to see more! Quote
teleri Posted April 28, 2009 Author Posted April 28, 2009 (edited) thanks flint glad you like it XD Actually, I believe it is not underground.Anyway, the strip looks great so far! Easy to read! jifel there homes are in underground caves/lakes... lol but in a different time zone and the different catacombs lead to different places/times... so they sort of arnt... thanks. i'm glade you like it... XD Looks like a promising start!Two minor suggestions: 1) Spell check! 2) In the caption boxes, some of the words are broken across multiple lines. Like in the second panel, "remains" and "history." Good luck! I'm curious to see more! thanks it's cool to see so many replys saying its cool and giving me ideas... and genraly helping... like with the spelling.. i forgot to cheack and didnt notise myself so... thanks XD yes i've just notised that to... sorry... but thanks for all the c&c... speak soon Teleri XD p.s. i have just started on the next one! XD p.p.s. i take it those are space marines on your sig...? or are they gray-nights? lol i collect space wolves... XD and wood elves and a lot of different mordheim war-bands Edited April 28, 2009 by teleri Quote
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