Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 (edited) Ha! Sounds like I'm getting warmer....but Artidax is part of the Southern Islands....or wait....it's further south..... :devil: :devil:Oh...after you post chapter 2, can you show me the pic of the island that you chose....??? Edit: Since I almost guessed this location, I'll give you a hint of my next dimension...(HINT: It's one of the three locations where Takanuva went to prior to his arrival in Karda Nui) The Kingdom. BTW, this is just a shot in the dark, but would you want to do some kind of cross over thing where Skralla ends up in the dimension of my epic? P.S. Would you mind doing a drawing of Vercii or Vake for me? Edited April 11, 2009 by Avohkahs' Sparks Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 (edited) The Kingdom. BTW, this is just a shot in the dark, but would you want to do some kind of cross over thing where Skralla ends up in the dimension of my epic?P.S. Would you mind doing a drawing of Vercii or Vake for me? OMG!!! You read my mind!!!! But let's wait on that for a little bit (Maybe after they visit their 2nd dimension) and yes it's The Kingdom.....Now this is just like Tsubasa and xxxHolic!!!! Still, let's do it!!! Just continue on your story, I'll deal with mines, I'll let you know when I'm ready.... I'll try to draw them out....but I need some descriptions....!!! Edited April 11, 2009 by Toa Mata Nui Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 OMG!!! You read my mind!!!! But let's wait on that for a little bit (Maybe after they visit their 2nd dimension) and yes it's The Kingdom.....Now this is just like Tsubasa and xxxHolic!!!! Still, let's do it!!! Just continue on your story, I'll deal with mines, I'll let you know when I'm ready.... I'll try to draw them out....but I need some descriptions....!!! I'll tell you what. I'll let you design Vercii whatever way you want. He just has to be white, grey, and really light blue. But other that that, feel free to design him any way you want. Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 I'll tell you what. I'll let you design Vercii whatever way you want. He just has to be white, grey, and really light blue. But other that that, feel free to design him any way you want. Alright then, I'll make a human-bionicle based like how I did with the other characters...I'll pm to you when I am done. Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 If you don't mind could you make it less human based? Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 If you don't mind could you make it less human based? opps...I already started it..... ...... It's kinda hard for me to draw right out of a bionicle figure.... Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 opps...I already started it..... ...... It's kinda hard for me to draw right out of a bionicle figure.... Then you can draw what you were planning to, and I'll decide if it fits. Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 I'm almost done ...but I'm at my grandma's house. (We are setting up for tomorrow's Easter Party) Apparently the camera is at my house.... I'll post chapter 6 later today if I have time... oh and for a heads up.... By the end of Chapter 7, my people will be in your world...so get ready...I'll wait till you are further in the story... Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 (edited) I'm almost done ...but I'm at my grandma's house. (We are setting up for tomorrow's Easter Party) Apparently the camera is at my house.... I'll post chapter 6 later today if I have time... oh and for a heads up.... By the end of Chapter 7, my people will be in your world...so get ready...I'll wait till you are further in the story... Almost done with chapter two, let me know when your ready. Chapter Two! Edited April 11, 2009 by Avohkahs' Sparks Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 Almost done with chapter two, let me know when your ready. Chapter Two! The Picture is on its way. I need to download it....Oh, I still have to post chapter 5 and 6 on BZpower... so that "Crossover conflict" will have to wait for a bit... Oh do you have Easter Vacation from 4/13-4/19?? Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 The Picture is on its way. I need to download it....Oh, I still have to post chapter 5 and 6 on BZpower... so that "Crossover conflict" will have to wait for a bit...Oh do you have Easter Vacation from 4/13-4/19?? Unfortunately, no. I have a quick question. Could you make the picture a little more mechanical looking? If not, you don't have to do it, I'll just ask someone else. Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 Unfortunately, no. I have a quick question. Could you make the picture a little more mechanical looking? If not, you don't have to do it, I'll just ask someone else. :sadnew: Sadly, it's hard for me to draw mechanical characters, I can only do animae. I did attempt to draw Skralla (in set form) once and omg! It looked awkward...which is why I drew the princess in animae form...it's a lot easier for me.... But still, do you like that picture??? Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 :sadnew: Sadly, it's hard for me to draw mechanical characters, I can only do animae. I did attempt to draw Skralla (in set form) once and omg! It looked awkward...which is why I drew the princess in animae form...it's a lot easier for me....But still, do you like that picture??? Ya, it's really good. I hope you don't mind though, but I need a mechanical one. Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 (edited) Ya, it's really good. I hope you don't mind though, but I need a mechanical one. I understand...Chapter 6 is coming right up!!! (on here, not BZPower, I already posted Chapter 5) Chapter 6: A Dimension of Prosperity Main Dimension, Bara Magna Adriax and the other Agori were traveling across the corridors of the Arena Magna. Most of the hallways were damaged but their path to what they needed was strangely intact. “What are we seeking?” asked Tarduk for the third time. “Nothing special, just something that can get us travel quickly,” replied Adriax. “In other words, vehicles,” answered the Zesk. They arrived at a room that housed some of the vehicles. There were a few Thornatus V9 based vehicles while one was a Skopio VX-1. *** Fero and his remaining tribe of the Bone Hunters carefully traverse the Wastelands. (For an unknown reason, they weren’t cured from the light when Skralla fulfilled her destiny.) They wanted revenge at several Glatorian for defeating the Skrall and making them unite with them. “Can’t we just fight full force?” asked one of the Bone Hunters. “No. Let them just think that they won their greatest battle. That’s one of a great weakness that a Glatorian has. They just leave off victorious when the battle is just far from over,” answered Fero. Skirmix, though was a happy Rock Steed. This creature loved to chase after Agori. A while back, he and Fero were chasing one of the Agori from Tajun but was stopped by three Glatorian. By stampeding on one of them, they managed to escape. *** Ackar, Tuma and Berix were heading towards Iconox. They believed that they could fetch some Exisdian could temporally fix the leak. Though this metal was popular there, the price to buy a sample was quite expensive. “Shouldn’t we just sneak in?” asked Berix. “We can’t. Even if they understand our situation, they won’t agree,” said Ackar. “But there is a way,” said Tuma, “I remember a friend of mine, Starax, who taught me how to dig out fresh Exisdian. But it takes a lot of patience and digging skills to even get a handful.” “Then maybe we can speed it up,” insisted Ackar, igniting his torch. *** Unknown Dimension… Skralla opened her eyes and look around. Her and the others were in some weird place. In fact, the world around them was shrinking! “What’s going on?” she shouted. Her cries managed to wake the others up. “What is this?” asked Kiina, watching as some of the structures disappeared into the void. “This world is shrinking!” replied Vastus. “We have to get out of here!” shouted Malum. Together, they turned to the throne and concentrated its power, but it did nothing. “It’s not working!” shouted Strakk. “Skralla! Quick staring and help us!” shouted Malum. But Skralla wasn’t paying attention, her mind was in another world. She could hear Certavus saying something about the throne. You must sit on the throne if you must resume your journey. Your powers that you received aren’t gone, just isolated. Hurry! There isn’t much time! Skralla shook her head and realized that there wasn’t that much time left. The void was closing in around her and her friends. If she hesitated another second, it would be all over. She pushed her way through, leaped and landed on the throne. Father, forgive me if I sit, she thought. As soon as she sat down, the throne began to glitter. Then everyone began to teleport to their next destination. Just as they disappeared, the world collapsed… *** The Kingdom Alternate Dimension… Turaga Takanuva sat on his throne. He was quite exhausted for the past few days. Already he encountered his alternate self from another universe, though his light was partly drained. As he sat back and thought back, Roodaka entered inside and said, “Turaga. There are new comers from another world!” “Is it another me?” he asked. “No, not from what I heard. Axonn is going to check them to make sure they aren’t Makuta,” she replied. “No. Tell him to bring them in, I want to see them,” replied the Turaga. *** Few minutes earlier… The portal opened and down came Skralla and her friends. They all landed on a beach. The world around them was a gigantic place. Most of the buildings were varied in different sizes, edifices, and residents. “What is this place?” she asked. “Wow. It looks more welcoming than our last dimension,” said Kiina. “Not to mention all of these different species,” said Vastus. All around them, the Matoran, Toa and as well as different creatures were at work together. None of them seemed to have any issues. What really was astonishing was that some of the civilians were building a gigantic machine. But as they were about to explore this paradise, a red and silver figure approached to them and asked, “Who are you? What brings you to the Kingdom of The Great Spirit?” “We are just travelers,” said Vastus. “Is there a teleporting device around here so we can continue our journey through dimensional space?” asked Skralla. Axonn used his Rode to make sure that they weren’t lying. After realizing what they wanted he replied, “The Turaga wants to see you. Perhaps he can help you on your journey.” *** The Coliseum ahead was similar to that in Metru Nui, but unlike being it heavily guarded, it was free and available to the open public. Axonn sent them to Trinuma, who then brought them to the Turaga. “So who is in charge of this?” asked Kiina. “The Turaga, Turaga Takanuva,” replied Trinuma. He opened the door for all of them to come in. Once they entered, Trinuma gave a signal to Takanuva and left. “So it is,” said Takanuva, “Welcome to The Kingdom!” “The Kingdom?” asked Skralla, “I once lived in a kingdom too, but not like this.” “Really?” asked Takanuva, “Talk.” After Skralla explained about her situation, the turaga asked, “So where is this ‘throne’?” “We don’t know,” said Vastus, “When we arrive in a new dimension, it goes to a different place and we have to find it,” “But it wasn’t like that on our last trip!” said Kiina. “It’s testing us,” answered Skralla, “Who knows where it’s at!” “I can help you on that,” said the Turaga. *** Turaga Takanuva led the Glatorian across the streets of the Kingdom. All over were different species selling all sorts of weapons, food, and supplies. “So what are we looking for?” asked Skralla. “You’ll see,” said the turaga. They arrived at a small shack where it was full of kanohi masks. “Is anyone home?” asked the turaga. A matoran shouted, “Who is it?” “This is the Turaga, may I come in?” “Oh, certainly, please do!” “What’s he doing?” asked Malum. “He’s trying to help us,” said Kiina. After a few minutes, the turaga returned with some sort of a mask. Its appearance was blue and it had some weird tubes around the eyes. “This is the Kanohi Elda, the mask of detection. It can be used to detect objects and places,” explained the turaga, “Although you aren’t Toa, I can ask another friend of mine to modify it so you can use its power. *** Main Dimension, Bara Magna Belriax and the other Skrall were surrounded by the shadows. Each time they tried to attack, the darkness came closer to them. “Any last words?” asked Belriax. “Yes, we are Skrall!” shouted the other Skrall. Then they heard a loud noise of several vehicles. Before they could figure it out, they were swiped away. “Raanu?” asked Belriax. “Hang out!” shouted the Agori, “This is going to be a rough ride!” Raanu and the others managed to get the vehicles and piloted them. When they saw Belirax and another Skrall, they rode at maximum speed and managed to save them. “Where’s the other Skrall?” she asked. “He’s riding on the Thornatus with Tarduk,” he answered. “We have to find Tuma and the others!” shouted Adriax. “Why? There’s not much time left!” snapped Raanu. “They said that they were heading to Iconox to find some exisdian to stop the leak!” *** “We need it this instant,” snapped Tuma. Tuma and the others arrived in Iconox and talked to their leader, Cevarax. “Do you have a price to pay?” asked Cevarax. “Do you want to see what’s going on right now?” said Berix. Tuma dragged the Agori outside and pointed at the shadows threatening Bara Magna. “It’s your choice,” said Tuma, “Either give us a good supply of Exisdian, or live your life in the darkness,” “How am I supposed to trust you?” “My daughter is traveling dimensions right now; she’s trying to stop this darkness. But there’s another leak right now. Do you want to see another Shattering?” That last phrase placed Cevarax in place. “Very well, head out to the mines. It’s a bit east of here but you’ll find it. Take what you need and hurry back!” Edited April 12, 2009 by Toa Mata Nui Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 I understand...Chapter 6 is coming right up!!! (on here, not BZPower, I already posted Chapter 5) Okay. BTW, how do you want to do the crossover? Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 (edited) Okay. BTW, how do you want to do the crossover? Hmmm....now that will be tricky (ch. 6 is up!! just go back a post...) First of all...we need to exchange a list of our characters and we have to know who's the good, who's the bad, etc. Then once I get chapter 6 on BZpower (hopefully by tomorrow).... better yet, tell me what do you want to do with your characters....(since my characters will be in your dimension, I need to know what's about to happen...more yet...what are your ideas for chapter 3 in your story....) Remember...I can't have my characters to stay in your dimension for long....they have to travel some more still... Edited April 11, 2009 by Toa Mata Nui Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 We'll I wouldn't mind killing of Roodaka or Skirr. I'm planning on introducing Toa Gavla. Chapter three was ging to be Toa Gaaki being taken to the Reformative Triangle, we could use that, except I need Gaaki to make it there and stay there. It would also be good if there was a confrontation and battle with Vake and someone else, possibly Skralla. Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 We'll I wouldn't mind killing of Roodaka or Skirr. I'm planning on introducing Toa Gavla. Chapter three was ging to be Toa Gaaki being taken to the Reformative Triangle, we could use that, except I need Gaaki to make it there and stay there. It would also be good if there was a confrontation and battle with Vake and someone else, possibly Skralla. Skralla has no powers....maybe Mata Nui??? Or will that be too easy??? If not....maybe Stronius (so he can die) Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 Skralla has no powers....maybe Mata Nui??? Or will that be too easy??? If not....maybe Stronius (so he can die) Sounds good, but doesn't Skralla still have the staff? Or maybe the throne can give her some special powers... Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 Sounds good, but doesn't Skralla still have the staff? Or maybe the throne can give her some special powers... The Staff is in the hands of Garaxial...remember??? He "stole the necklace" Maybe The travelers will get caught by some "Toa who follow the code" and then maybe Malum, Strakk, Vastus Stronius should fight, then Stronius could injured to the extent that he'll die.... Mata Nui and Skralla will try to run together (I'm planning for a slight relationship between the two.....) Skralla and the remaining survivors should then escape and try to find the throne (since it'll be located in a random spot in the MU) Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 The Staff is in the hands of Garaxial...remember??? He "stole the necklace"Maybe The travelers will get caught by some "Toa who follow the code" and then maybe Malum, Strakk, Vastus Stronius should fight, then Stronius could injured to the extent that he'll die.... Mata Nui and Skralla will try to run together (I'm planning for a slight relationship between the two.....) Skralla and the remaining survivors should then escape and try to find the throne (since it'll be located in a random spot in the MU) Toa Lesovikk... He would be perfect, considering Vake rescued Roodaka from the pit anyway. Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 Toa Lesovikk... He would be perfect, considering Vake rescued Roodaka from the pit anyway. What about Toa Lesovikk?? Will he help the travelers??? Quote
Matsuoka Nui Posted April 11, 2009 Author Posted April 11, 2009 Yeah. Here's the deal: Chapter 7 of my story still takes place in the Kingdom, they'll arrive in your dimension by the end of the chapter. Mabye then the fight can begin and having Stronius badly injured. By chapter 8, he'll die and then Lesovikk will save The Travelers... Here's our plan..... Start your rough draft of chapter 3.....I'll look at it and see if it needs to be edited....let me know when it's ready. I'll be busy all day tomorrow so I might not get a chance to be on the internet. I'll be very fortunate if I do... I'll let you know what we'll do next.... Quote
Avohkahs' Sparks Posted April 11, 2009 Posted April 11, 2009 Here's the deal:Chapter 7 of my story still takes place in the Kingdom, they'll arrive in your dimension by the end of the chapter. Mabye then the fight can begin and having Stronius badly injured. By chapter 8, he'll die and then Lesovikk will save The Travelers... Here's our plan..... Start your rough draft of chapter 3.....I'll look at it and see if it needs to be edited....let me know when it's ready. I'll be busy all day tomorrow so I might not get a chance to be on the internet. I'll be very fortunate if I do... I'll let you know what we'll do next.... One problem. I need Lesovikk to be in the battle with Vake. Quote
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