Skinny Boy Posted January 5, 2009 Posted January 5, 2009 (edited) Last time, The Captain and his team had just communicated with an incoming helicopter. The others were only waking up at the docks. Fate is twisty here. Part 14: Whats a Pocalypse? "Alright. Sid. Hayes. This is it. We are going to the Hospital. Lets hope we see the others there." "Baseplate, this is Lt.Grant of BM 11. We have positive I.D. on Captain Fay, and surviving civilians. Request permission for pickup?" "BM 11, this is baseplate. You're cleared for landing, but you only got about 10 minutes, so hurry." "Roger that Baseplate." "What was that?" Soldier: "Captain Fay- -good to meet you. I'm Sgt. Malone, here to pick you up, and put you in an armchair on our closest carrier." Jack: "He's not Cpt. Fay. He's Corporal Hayes." Malone: "Then wheres the Captain? We just got word from him that he wants a pickup at this location." "We don't know where he is. We got separated last night." Malone: "Dammit...- - Grant! How much time we got?" Grant: "5 Minutes." "Until what?" Soldier: "The nuke, so get on board." "So we're just leavin' the others?" "Sorry man. Nothin we can do. Its the only solution." Jack: "Killin' more people. Thats all the government can do." "Yeah. See ya later Nick, Carl and the two soldier guys." Hayes: "Cpt. Fay, and Cpl. Sang." "Yeah, whatever." Malone: "Cheer up guys. Soon enough we'll be on an aircraft carrier! How exciting is that?" Jack: "You're talkin to 3 guys with guns, who were just taken out of a city, which they were tryin' to liberate from zombies, and you're askin us if we're excited? Malone:".... You wanna use the grenade launcher?" "Yeah!" Finale Captain: "Well guys, we made it. Where's the chopper?" "Carl?" "They're two minutes late." "Son-of-a. He said 15 minutes. Where the hell are they!" Capt.: "Sang. How long?" "30 seconds." "What? 30 seconds until what?" Capt.: "Oh nothin. Just a game." Sang: "10 seconds Captain. - -5..4..- -3..2..- -1." Explosions are heard. A rumbling begins, and gets stronger fast. "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!" "Any ideas Sir?" "Yeah, quickly... into this p----------------- Edited January 5, 2009 by Skinny Boy Quote
Wouwie Posted January 5, 2009 Posted January 5, 2009 Great, as always Any chance of more shots of the chopper? I really like to see it Quote
Zepher Posted January 5, 2009 Posted January 5, 2009 That's sad. Nice ending. It was hard to follow all the characters, but it was good none the less! Quote
Bob Posted January 5, 2009 Posted January 5, 2009 I really liked that part alot. The humor and cool sets made me really excited to see the next part. Nice Job! Quote
Lego12 Posted January 5, 2009 Posted January 5, 2009 They died? This is worse than the Witch Hunt Mafia! That was a good ending, but they died? That sucks! Change the ending, now or I'll make you change it..... :skull: Quote
Skinny Boy Posted January 6, 2009 Author Posted January 6, 2009 Great, as always Any chance of more shots of the chopper? I really like to see it Thanks Wouwie! You might get to see more of it in my next couple of parts in my new Cod4 Based series! That's sad. Nice ending. It was hard to follow all the characters, but it was good none the less! 'Tis very sad. Yeah, once again I have about ten guys all talking in Black writing. I really liked that part alot.The humor and cool sets made me really excited to see the next part. Nice Job! Thanks Bob. Next part? Somebody knows a little too much They died? This is worse than the Witch Hunt Mafia! That was a good ending, but they died? That sucks! Change the ending, now or I'll make you change it..... :skull: Sorry to hear your upset Lego12. You may cheer up, if the guys appear, in SUMMER :skull: Quote
Zepher Posted January 6, 2009 Posted January 6, 2009 Yeah. I continuation of this would be cool. I would advise slightly new characters though. Maybe just realting it to this would be enough! Quote
Skinny Boy Posted January 7, 2009 Author Posted January 7, 2009 Yeah. I continuation of this would be cool. I would advise slightly new characters though. Maybe just realting it to this would be enough! Yeah, I was thinking of adding a chicken, and a lonely guy. Focusing on them more. Whattaya think? But, the continuation will be seriously different. Can't say how, or if its really in a 'good' way, but it will be different. Too bad it'll be like 5/6 months before I can start now. Stupid school Quote
Wouwie Posted January 7, 2009 Posted January 7, 2009 More parts! Just for the chopper Nah, just kidding. I just love these series! Yeah, I was thinking of adding a chicken, and a lonely guy. Focusing on them more. Whattaya think? Hey! Don't abuse chickens! They're powerless animals! Quote
Zepher Posted January 7, 2009 Posted January 7, 2009 Yeah, I was thinking of adding a chicken, and a lonely guy. Focusing on them more. Whattaya think? But, the continuation will be seriously different. Can't say how, or if its really in a 'good' way, but it will be different. Too bad it'll be like 5/6 months before I can start now. Stupid school I just need to edit the newest parts, but I'm so darn busy. Quote
Skinny Boy Posted January 12, 2009 Author Posted January 12, 2009 I just need to edit the newest parts, but I'm so darn busy. Yes, chickens can be a talonfull I might make a topic (with a poll) asking what people would like to see in the next one. Improvements, places to be visited and stuff. I have my two starter points planned out already... but they need a continuation. I'll be thinking. Any suggestions? (no more of that character nonsense , though i'll be changing some clothing, which will make it even harder to read :skull: ) Quote
Wouwie Posted January 12, 2009 Posted January 12, 2009 How about that the carrier/militairy based is under attack by zombies? Quote
Skinny Boy Posted January 13, 2009 Author Posted January 13, 2009 How about that the carrier/militairy based is under attack by zombies? Oh, well I wasn't planning on making a whole carrier! Just a few scenes on it, so I dont think that idea will work. Something will need to happen in the city (which will now mostly be rubble) which will be the reason for having a continuation. Quote
Wouwie Posted January 13, 2009 Posted January 13, 2009 Oh, well I wasn't planning on making a whole carrier! Just a few scenes on it, so I dont think that idea will work.Something will need to happen in the city (which will now mostly be rubble) which will be the reason for having a continuation. Well...You could use something like when they're in the air, the carrier is under attack and they need to go to another militairy base... Quote
Skinny Boy Posted January 13, 2009 Author Posted January 13, 2009 Well...You could use something like when they're in the air, the carrier is under attack and they need to go to another militairy base... Ah... Very interesting. Your Birthday certainly got your creative juices flowing I will certainly be thinking about this. Actually I already have some ideas Thanks! Quote
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